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Fanfic means fan fiction, and the meaning of fan fiction itself refers to stories created according to the writer's wishes. So if you ask for consistency in fanfic, it is almost impossible. There may be some that you find consistent, but most are not. You have to understand that fanfic has a high level of flexibility. If you don't even understand the meaning of fanfic, then I will not respond to your foolish comment.
Alright, I will let you know that the story in this novel from chapters 1 to 150 has a fairly clear purpose, which is to develop the MC's abilities as well as the development of Uzushio Village and the Uzumaki Clan. If someone says there is a lack of interaction between characters, that is true from chapter 75 onwards, but in the early chapters, that is not the case. If the interaction between characters is lacking, then how do you explain the interactions between the MC and Karina? The MC and Kushina? The MC and Keito? The MC and Yamata-no-Orochi? The MC and Kasumi? All of that is present in chapters 75 and below. So if someone says there is a lack of interaction between characters, then you have not been reading carefully. Then why does the MC often seem to be trying to train? Isn't that quite clear? Uzushio Village will soon be attacked according to the timeline of the Naruto story. Don't you know the story of Uzushio Village being attacked by three other major villages? Have you really read the manga or watched the Naruto anime? That is why the MC needs to develop by continuing to train, not only to improve the MC's abilities but also to strengthen Uzushio Village and the Uzumaki Clan. If not, wouldn't Uzushio Village be destroyed just like in the original timeline? That is why the MC's goal is clear: to become stronger. Remember, this is a non-system fanfic novel, so if you read this novel and find the story's development slow, it's because there is clearly no nonsense system in this novel that gives the MC overpowered abilities just for completing missions by running around. Do you understand? Will this become a harem? Good question. Can two or three be called a harem? If two or three can be called a harem, then yes! This will be a harem. However, if two or three cannot be called a harem, then yes! This is not a harem. If someone says, "Ah, annoying, the heroine is just an OC," well, don't be mistaken; look at chapter 115. There, you might have already guessed the heroine besides Karina, so don't give a stupid review just because one of the heroines is an OC, because there will be one or two CC heroine characters, understand? Well, I have given quite a few spoilers, so that's it. I hope you enjoy this novel. Thank you.
You need to read up to the latest chapter before you can give a review about the interactions between characters. Indeed, in chapters 75 and above, there are more developments in the MC's abilities. Why? Because the plot involves the Uzumaki Clan being attacked. You have to understand that the MC starts off weak. Do you think this is a ridiculous system story where he just runs around becoming super strong? You need to realize that at that time, the Uzumaki Clan is about to face a crisis, so the MC has to grow stronger while occasionally interacting with other characters. Otherwise, do you want to see the MC die in vain? So don’t give a review without reading in more detail; at least read it slowly, don’t rush.
What? No interactions between characters? What about the MC with Karina? The MC with Kushina? The MC with Keito? The MC with Yamata-no-Orochi? Where is the lack of interaction? Are you sure you are reading carefully?
No, it's not a problem; I should be the one apologizing. I'm sorry, and thank you very much. There are really only a few readers like you who truly provide reasonable criticism and suggestions, rather than just throwing out stupid insults without any explanation. Your criticism and suggestions are really great, thank you, thank you very much!
Then regarding the Sage Mode issue, I know that it requires a large amount of Chakra, so large that it is almost impossible for anyone to use it. It is indeed necessary to balance the Natural Energy itself, but imagine, if, possibly, hypothetically, if one has little Chakra and only absorbs a little Natural Energy, then maybe, just maybe, it could be possible to use a very limited Sage Mode, very limited! This is a theory I made, a theory, speculation.
The Strongest Swordmaster in the World of Naruto
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Of course I understand this, I write stories with the theme of a weak main character who gradually becomes stronger, but your ignorance can't see this. You talk too much nonsense, acting like you know everything. Just be quiet, you fool!
Seeing your response makes me feel embarrassed. I admit that I wrote the story too hastily, and I know that I forced some parts of it. I didn't expect to receive such great criticism and suggestions like this. It's truly rare to find someone who expresses such meaningful and wonderful thoughts as you have, and it makes me happy. I am really glad to receive such valuable and significant feedback. For now, that cannot be changed, but I will make sure to create better and more polished chapters in the future, using the criticism and suggestions you provided. Thank you, thank you very much, and I'm sorry. I apologize for speaking harshly and expressing all my anger towards you. I feel ashamed, and I want to apologize to you.
Then regarding the Sage Mode issue, I know that it requires a large amount of Chakra, so large that it is almost impossible for anyone to use it. It is indeed necessary to balance the Natural Energy itself, but imagine, if, possibly, hypothetically, if one has little Chakra and only absorbs a little Natural Energy, then maybe, just maybe, it could be possible to use a very limited Sage Mode, very limited! This is a theory I made, a theory, speculation.
The Strongest Swordmaster in the World of Naruto
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Let's assume that all the plots I created at the beginning are full of nonsense and unclear, then I ask you, have you ever read a novel like Naruto with a System concept? Have you ever read a novel like that? Then I ask, if you read a novel like that, with a story where the main character gains powers just by completing trivial missions like picking up stones, running around, and then gets extraordinary cheat abilities, do you think that’s amazing? Do you think that makes sense? If so, then you are very selfish to consider my entire story full of nonsense while you think novels with such a system concept are good. Okay, I admit that Sakumo's change in perspective is indeed too fast, but if I made that story slower and more convoluted, do you think anyone would enjoy that? I ask you if that would be a good thing? The concept of this story is already quite clear, which is to become stronger as a swordsman. If you want this story to be more complex and convoluted and really good, like the novel Naruto: The Outsider’s Resolve, then you can just create it yourself. I have already thought hard about making this story, and I am not just creating this story; I am making two other stories as well. Do you think I can write a novel like Naruto: The Outsider’s Resolve with my busy schedule with other novels? It’s impossible, unless I focus solely on this novel, and regarding the issue of Chakra disease and all that nonsense, I will explain it in chapter 150. Yes, I will patch the holes in this story in the future. You only see the holes that exist in the early chapters, but you have not yet seen what is in the following chapters. As for Minato and the explanation of Natural Energy being too far-fetched, what can I do? Do you think if I don’t create a story for this to happen, how do you think the main character can use Natural Energy? And how do you think the main character can develop? You have to consider that in a story full of holes, there are much bigger holes that need to be covered. That’s why I created a story like this. Do you think I don’t listen to others? No! You are wrong! I listen to them; it’s just that they cannot see this story from a writer's perspective. You don’t understand how a writer has to write a story without making it too full of holes. Whether the story has many holes or just a few holes to cover more holes, in the future, those holes will be closed with a more reasonable story. Do you understand? You only think as a reader, but I think as a writer. You don’t realize that we writers have to think about and see which story potential looks more promising. I don’t mind if you don’t like this story, but you criticize it without thinking as a writer, without considering how this story continues without having too many visible holes. That’s why I am angry with you and other readers. You who do not understand what it feels like to write a story will not understand how the story should continue and how to create some holes or mysteries at the beginning, just to be closed in the future. If you don’t like this story, that’s fine; I’m not forcing you. I don’t care either. It’s just that if you want to give criticism and suggestions, please make those criticisms and suggestions more reasonable and something I can incorporate as a writer.
Then regarding the Sage Mode issue, I know that it requires a large amount of Chakra, so large that it is almost impossible for anyone to use it. It is indeed necessary to balance the Natural Energy itself, but imagine, if, possibly, hypothetically, if one has little Chakra and only absorbs a little Natural Energy, then maybe, just maybe, it could be possible to use a very limited Sage Mode, very limited! This is a theory I made, a theory, speculation.
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Aoki's father only works for Kuzan.
"That boy is the new worker I hired. His name is Aoki, and he wants to learn to forge weapons here," Kuzan replied, informing Sakumo about Aoki.
The Strongest Swordmaster in the World of Naruto
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