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That's difficult, Alfia was a monster capable of fighting with a lv9 being lv7 and her ability lay more in her magic and unique abilities than in her combat capabilities, which although they were not low, were not the best within her family, I think that Just by having Alfia use her strongest magic, Shirou's UBW falls apart.

Este colgante, ¿cómo habrá hecho Drake para que tuviera este tipo de efecto?, el único inconveniente es que parece estar incompleto, por eso el chico lo dejo de lado como un artefacto fallido, ¿se debe a las notas de ese no muerto Fels?.

"Fuuuh", respire hondo con algo de nerviosismo al ver frente a mí el único regalo que prepararon mis padres, cuidadosamente lo tome y comencé a desenfundar la espada.

Ella, con una expresión algo infantil, se sentó a horcajadas encima de mi regazo, luego toco mi rostro de manera suave y delicada, delineando el contorno afilado de mi rostro.

It is a very good Danmachi fic, its premise is very interesting and although I think you should better manage its growth rate, everything is acceptable, however for those who know too much the details of the parallel stories and games it becomes somewhat complicated to handle since it is a bit confusing, the clearest example is the error regarding monsters on the surface, although in places populated by humans they are weak, there are not a few of them and they usually live attacking humanoid races, there are also unexplored regions where they cannot It is clearly detailed but it is known that there are very strong monsters, clear examples are the Nidhoogs and Behemoth of lower rank that still roam the surface, the clearest proof of this is that there are adventurers of level 5-6 in the different countries that They are world superpowers like Rakia which Orario doesn't even know about. Another mistake is the issue of magic circles to use magic which is not entirely true, although there are some who use it, it is more of an exception and not the general rule. Finally, I want to encourage you, I see a huge effort writing the story and I want to thank you for allowing us to read something interesting and that I hope you can continue it regularly, I don't say every day because as a writer I also know how tiring it can be to write the chapters every day, without However, it is good to go at a pace at which you feel comfortable.

Guys, I'm sorry for the delay, I was a little busy last week, I also reread the story looking to create some information sheets to make everything as coherent as possible and well, here we are with a triple update

"What was that? I suddenly felt a chill down my spine," I thought I heard Julián's voice, who should already be quite far from the office.