General_Komrade

General_Komrade

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2023-10-06 Bergabung Australia
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General_Komrade
General_Komrade
3 months ago
Replied to DaoistLuCcoZ

Thanks for your review! It's on hiatus- I'll still want to write, so more chapters will be released early next year.

General_Komrade
General_Komrade
4 months ago
Posted

As an author, I'd just like to just remind you to be careful when using AI with your story. I know it's very tempting, but the reason people read your work is for your own unique, human style. Your writing is obviously partially, if not entirely AI. Now, there's nothing wrong with using AI to help you generate ideas and outline your story, and even help structure your chapters, But please be very careful in using it to write your chapters. Just simply: don't do it. If you can, I recommend writing the whole chapter by yourself (I know it's not easy, it takes me 4 hours to write 1000 words) and then when you feel you can't improve it any more, put your complete chapter into AI and ask it for improvements. (Let AI check your work, not you checking AI's work) From experience, readers have a near unlimited amount of books to read; they want to read a human's hard work (they want you to bleed for them), not a book generated by AI. Anyways, there's a lot I can talk about in terms of plot and story, but I don't think that very suitable right now. (I've already rambled a ton) I don't want to discourage you, I think that writing's an awesome thing to do! That's why I gave 5 stars. In fact, if it wasn't written with AI, I would be ranting about how incredible the writing is. Purely put, the writing is *perfect*, much better than mine! It's at the quality of a top veteran writer, unbelievably perfect, and apart from the plot, has literally nothing to be improved upon. (And obviously, this level of writing is going to turn some heads) Anyways, feel free to delete my review if you don't want it on your book. Don't let me discourage you! (Actually, I'm expecting this review to be deleted, that's what I would do haha) The target audience of this review is you, nobody has to see it ^^ If you want help or further feedback on your writing feel free to send me your handle, I'd be happy to help.

General_Komrade
General_Komrade
6 months ago
Replied to Daoist6PvXFl

I'm gonna take this as a quick chance to give an update: This current plan of posting a single chapter every time is actually pretty bad to the story as it locks me out of changing my mind and making changes. I want to try a different way and stock up on chapters first then I'll post them all. This'll probably take a while, and I hate that I won't be able to upload every week, but after 9 months of writing... I just can't keep up this rate anymore. I still have so much to write about and so much I want to say, but I'm getting a little tired of this work and want to try a few other ideas I've been having. I want to see this story being eventually completed, but I can't see that happening in the foreseeable near future. In the meantime I'll put my work on hiatus.

General_Komrade
General_Komrade
6 months ago
Replied to Luconiano

I'm gonna take this as a quick chance to give an update: This current plan of posting a single chapter every time is actually pretty bad to the story as it locks me out of changing my mind and making changes. I want to try a different way and stock up on chapters first then I'll post them all. This'll probably take a while, and I hate that I won't be able to upload every week, but after 9 months of writing... I just can't keep up this rate anymore. I still have so much to write about and so much I want to say, but I'm getting a little tired of this work and want to try a few other ideas I've been having. I want to see this story being eventually completed, but I can't see that happening in the foreseeable near future. In the meantime I'll put my work on hiatus.

General_Komrade
General_Komrade
9 months ago
Replied to IWillCrucifyReimu

It can also translate to the english word "Empire"

However little did the knight know, the Third Reich had always had the word "Empire" in its name. Yet, their standing did not come from some vague, vain title or the accumulation of centuries. It came from their pure, iron strength. A proof, carved from the blood of their enemies.

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General_Komrade
10 months ago
Replied to Klillo

You know what? Maybe I don't wanna get my book banned here. Nice suggestion

General_Komrade
General_Komrade
10 months ago
Commented

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Shortly behind the Paratroopers marched the infantry with noticeably heavier weaponry and uniforms. Most of them carried the Gewehr 98 bolt-action rifle. Their shiny bayonets shined in the sunlight. Every 50 infantry on average, there was a machine-gun squad. A machine gun squad consisted of 4 people carrying an MG 08 machine gun, meaning 1 gunner, 1 assistant gunner and 2 ammunition bearers.

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General_Komrade
General_Komrade
11 months ago
Replied to NovaEre

Basically means you are filled with an inflated sense of confidence and security when you hold a gun

Konrad split his guns and ammunition equally between him and Erwin. Loading his magazine of 30 full metal jacket 7.62x39mm rounds into his Kalashnikov, Konrad was full of confidence. He thought of a saying that he heard on Earth, "When humans held guns, they even dared to fight God!".

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General_Komrade
General_Komrade
11 months ago
Replied to Lexii098

Regular bullets

A thunderous roar instantly emerged from all sides of the base. Flashes of fire shot out the guns as the air was distorted by the power behind each bullet. Dust shaken up by the recoil of each bullet was instantly blown away by the shockwaves.

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General_Komrade
General_Komrade
1 years ago
Replied to The_Gaming_Mask

Average cultivation MC

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    War ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN ISEKAI KINGDOMBUILDING

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    Konrad Schuster, an above average high school student, suddenly finds himself transported to a strange new world filled with swords and magic, tasked with continuing the legacy of the Third Reich (WW2 Germany) after he touched his Grandfather's old German military uniform! He discovers a unique power that allows him to convert souls into source points. Using this power, Konrad can create anything he wants by simply imagining it! Soldiers! Guns! Tanks! Fighter Jets! Nuclear Bombs! As he explores this magical world, he must hunt and kill to expand his army and crush the locals with his overwhelming technological advantage! But danger is never far away, and Konrad must be cautious. He knows little about this world, and every decision he makes has consequences. He must use his technological superiority to his greatest advantage! WHAT TO EXPECT: A highly competent ruthless protagonist that acts and behaves like a proper general. He becomes intimidating, commanding and doesn't blink if he needs to get his hands dirty. He is a true evil protagonist. I hate beta and "nice" MC with a passion, so he is the exact opposite. TRIGGER WARNING: RACISM AND DISCRIMINATION (Against Demi-Humans) I DO NOT SUPPORT NAZIS Please don't take any views in my novel seriously, I just wrote this for fun, I don't support any Nazi ideals and behaviours. I just like the idea of a WW2 German army using modern equipment in a fantasy world. *Chapters* Chapters will be all over 1000 words. This is a FAST-PACED novel. Cover: Thanks N0xiety for the AI image!

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