Not currently, but there will be later in the novel.
If you have questions ask them on here, I'll respond to them as much as I can without spoiling the story
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So the powers that they have slighty confuse me but maybe Im just dumb, but the pacing is a little fast and that makes some things possibly confusing so I would try to work on slowing the pacing quite a bit but decent chapter.
It is good that you can see some of the issues you have please try to fix the paceing issue since the character development can be showed in latter chapters
Im a little confused on some of the things you have but the concept seems to be kinda of solid so good job. ill keep reading it for a while if there in improvement so best of luck.
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Loved the book so far, and as a fellow author I can just recommend to not listening to the hate but to also still listening since some people will give real advice
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I have only just finished the 6th chapter but I think that this book has potential, keep writing author many other authors will quit when they don't see progress in views but just keep writing
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Other than the issue with the text saying 5 out of 100 exp and then when the status screen says 5 out of 10 exp I would say that this book so far is pretty good for a start, I hope you continue to write and not quit like many authors
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original The Last king
When Gates began appearing on Earth, humanity couldn't stop the Creatures coming from the gates, this lead too thousands of millions of deaths and by the year 2029 all big citys and governments have fallen leaving just tiny outposts left to survive, by the year 2054 the first Awakened start to appear they are feared but people also see their potential at stoping the gates but these awakened individuals were also seen as different and shunned from society because common people feared their power, all the while Orion Rivers is trying to survive in the wasteland that was once earth but he lives a double life since he can return to his original life, but he has to choose between them since he doesn't have two souls.0 Chs 65 Koleksi
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Eclipsed realms
"In 'Eclipsed Realms,' Michal Java, a young man subjected to military experiments, finds himself transported to a new world infused with magic. Empowered by nanites known as 'Rogue Processes,' Michal navigates this unfamiliar realm. As Michal grapples with controlling his newfound abilities, he unwittingly becomes entangled in a conflict involving powerful families seeking ancient artifacts of immense power. Amidst accusations of demonic influence and internal struggles with malevolent forces bound to a ring he possesses, Michal's journey unfolds as he explores themes of power, morality, and the complexities of controlling forces beyond human comprehension in a world teetering on the brink of divine intervention."0 Chs 7 Koleksi
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