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What if I erred in my allocation? What if I amplified an attribute I oughtn't have and lived to rue the day?
Anime & Comics · OlwinMoriarty
It's okay if you leave your thoughts, because it helps me to know what needs to be improved. Anyway, it is a bit difficult for me to get rid of my habit of overcounting or overshowing. I've already written 10 extra chapters, and from your point of view, I wouldn't know if it's a filler chapter or not, but in the chapters I'm going to write, I'm going to try to eliminate that habit and just tell what's necessary
Yep. He will save her don't worry. Not at this hour though, but later.
Her. There it was. I heard it clearly now. They were talking about a specific someone. And not just anyone—a girl. A few images came to my mind, but one quickly settled in. That small, frail figure, always bent under the weight of those overstuffed backpacks. Those brown bangs peeking out from under the hood, and those brown eyes that smoldered with hatred whenever no one was looking. Liliruca Arde.
Anime & Comics · OlwinMoriarty
You are right about that. But hey, that's how I wrote the main character. It will change the way he thinks, after all, a person's psyche changes with experience
Leaning my body forward, I moved my feet slowly, one behind the other, noiselessly.
Anime & Comics · OlwinMoriarty
Yes, one can level up in the Falna once one reach rank D, which is 500-599 mastery; that would be about 50-59 SP from the system. And with the protagonist's strength stat at 60, could he defeat four adventurers of his own level in a fight? Even if he could, it would hardly be possible. And as I said, he is selfish. If he wasn't sure of victory, he wouldn't throw his life out the window to save one person.
Leaning my body forward, I moved my feet slowly, one behind the other, noiselessly.
Anime & Comics · OlwinMoriarty
If he were strong, he would save her. But he's still no stronger than those Level 1 peak adventurers. Fighting humans is different from fighting monsters. It wouldn't be very smart to go out to save a person and die trying. And talk to them? They would only listen with their fists, so there's no room for friendly conversation. As for the rhythm of the story, I will try to improve it.
Leaning my body forward, I moved my feet slowly, one behind the other, noiselessly.
Anime & Comics · OlwinMoriarty
Yeah. I wanted to portray the protagonist as someone selfish. Someone who wouldn't save a person without knowing them. He's not a hero. That's what Bell Cranel's POV is for.
Leaning my body forward, I moved my feet slowly, one behind the other, noiselessly.
Anime & Comics · OlwinMoriarty
Don't worry about that. Eithan can't know the future and is only making guesses as to what will be best for him now. In later chapters he will have a completely different Class
Thanks for reading. Bell has not yet arrived in Orario. It will be about a month before he arrives
In Danmachi with My System
Anime & Comics · OlwinMoriarty