Kevin_Phillips78

I highly recommend this fanfic, as it has been an incredibly enjoyable read for me. The conversation is well-written and avoids the problems of cringe-worthy writing thanks to excellent grammar. The updates have been steady, and I want they will keep arriving without pause. The story strikes a perfect pacing balance, neither rushed nor slow, and the action sequences are better than 80% of other fanfics. The main character is a breath of fresh air, deviating from the typical archetypes that plague dragon ball fanfics. While the world-building is still developing, it's clear that the author has plans to expand the Dragon Ball universe with new themes. In summary, this fanfic is a must-read, offering excellent grammar, comprehensible dialogue, consistent updates, exciting action, and a relatable protagonist.