HambinoRanx

You’re right I’ve seen that a lot, I know I’m no Brandon Sanderson, I can only hope to get better with time and feedback like yours helps me out in the future to become better so I do appreciate it

That’s fair to be upset on the surface, my approach with the start of this up until he of course died would be shock, A mid 20s adult working terrible shifts is less likely to believe a super natural event is occurring leading to how he acted. And with the fight, flight or freeze response the nervous system has on the body he leaned closer to freezing in the moment. It’s a huge character flaw that stays present for some time because I don’t think he should be a perfect character and that’s a flaw he had to work through. But I do understand this makes a lot of readers upset with his decision making, he can even get cheesy and over defensive of people he feels is important to him because he doesn’t want to lose anyone again and works through those emotions like a normal human would. I do apologize if any of this is polarizing or off putting I’m definitely not the best writer either by any means and learn as I go and make corrections as they are found

Sounds awesome man. Enjoy your reading journey and if you eventually find your way to my book I hope you enjoy the ride

Not really anti hero in that sense more closely aligned with his own goals, Like the universe isn’t revolving around him and he’s just focusing on getting back to earth as things go wrong. If you know a good tag for that il slide it in <3

Lawful evil. Will do the right thing and kill people if need be. Let me know if you have any other questions 🍺