systemwriterK

bro do transmigration intead of birthing a new body it s disgusting :( hope you can adjust next time.

the start feels like the follow up of a story. one sister fine but six is when most mc in those novels already at the peak so idk what the next vhapters are but feels weak to start like that

null . franchement le mc eclater lalalal

thia type of 'comedy' is really bad. the title stuff is irritating

read 120 chap clearly ia made if not i m sorry but it really look like one there is a system that doesn t even make an appearance at the start. ia can t write systems novels. people are so 2D even the mc feels lacking. so strong that the mc could build a better school himself instead of buying useless stuff unless author can t even comprehend what having read trillions of books and understanding magic beyond god level. it would take one minute to recreate the school. the thing he do feels really lacking and not really explain in depth saying iron gold diamond without making readers understand the strength of each category. so sorry based on 120 chapters i really feel it s ia. a human can t write that badly. ia has a tendancy to implement people groups etc with a side story to introduce them. just being superficial about everything it write like a sketch without colors. this book lack color that i feel. 200 chap it s maybe too late to improve but i hope you will write your next book yourself.

clearly a copy from a mtl i read just changed the names

really bad, and just 17 free chap? with how it s written can t you skip to the moment kids are born atcleast? so boring

i tried the cheat is not that op, lot of time skips. story not interesting maybe good for married couples who wants some fantasy but really bad. it doesn't feel enticing. at least personnaly

really hate this guy so annoying way of talking and the system is useless really don t get it

the mc is just a tool for his sister xDD