i am shameless can't lie, love my story but there is an issue i struggle with, pacing. but hey, we all start some where right, i will keep improving my skills as time goes on.
I mean...it's a story I wrote so obviously I love it no matter what anyone says, hope it's to your liking as well. Especially since the main is cold-hearted and ruthless, Hope it's not a turn-off.
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The general walks away and Rex is freed from the cuffs, he looks at the family members who are just staring at him. He walks over to apologise. He bows his head and apologises, "I am truly sorry for your loss." He looks up to the family who are not responding, he sees them smiling which shocks Rex a lot, the family walks away and Rex is left there staring blankly, "what was that just now?" He walks out of the building and heads to the dorm to pick up his things. On his way there many recruits start throwing stones at him, "ouch." He looks at them throwing stones while yelling, "murderer!!!" He looks down, smiles and continues walking, "it seems things are no different here." Rocks are hitting his head causing him to bleed but he ignores and continues walking.
Fantasy · mysticotaji
good to hear
I see, thanks for that
huh? what are you talking about? which weak people got arrested? and ofc the strong a revered since thy keep the people safe
their main objective for now is to take over their planet but who knows what might happen after. you know how greedy humans are
1000 years later
Fantasy · mysticotaji
thanks as always
god bless you
i hope he is not a hero, need me a cool anti hero
Ben 10: The System
TV · Mysticscaler