I was originally going to rate this fan fic three stars. Mainly because I was confused on why the mc was following his sister and the Zenin clans orders so willingly, but that was before I read the chapter where the author explains the sister cursed technique. And the fact, he does get revenge on the clan, boosts the story to 4 stars for me.
But besides that, its a well written story, but some of the fights are bland, and you can tell the author doesn't really want to write them and instead, uses them to progress the story. But its still a good read.
The world is truly lonely, especially when you've been forgotten, A man named David is constantly forgotten due to his ability, He lives a life of loneliness until He meets a man in a forest,
Nine kids are inside an old run-down house, and they are lost and confused with hundreds of unexplainable events occurring around them, they will go through many hardships through their journey and will they all be able to survive
I was originally going to rate this fan fic three stars. Mainly because I was confused on why the mc was following his sister and the Zenin clans orders so willingly, but that was before I read the chapter where the author explains the sister cursed technique. And the fact, he does get revenge on the clan, boosts the story to 4 stars for me. But besides that, its a well written story, but some of the fights are bland, and you can tell the author doesn't really want to write them and instead, uses them to progress the story. But its still a good read.
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