Hi there! I like the plot as it feels like I can relax reading it! I can only suggest one thing, if you let me: don't be too formal with your writing! But that's only my personal preference. You have good English input, so I can picture clearly every scene and character. Keep up the hard work!
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WHAAAAT???!! NOOO!!!
His eyes stayed fixed on the growing lights, and even though it started to hurt he didn't look away. He tensed his body and tightened his grip on the wheel, bracing for impact.
Breaking Into Your Heart
Teen · XanaTrygg
So romantic *---* and cute!
Isabelle was shocked to see his pout at first, but not more than a couple of seconds passed when she stood up and sat next to him. She undid his arms, and snuggled on his side with a hug. Allen took his arm over her back and tugged her closer, still looking out the window.
Breaking Into Your Heart
Teen · XanaTrygg
HAHAHAAHAHAHA poor soul!!
"What?" Allen asked with a blank expression. "Did I say something wrong?" This last sentence going to Isabelle as he looked down at her.
Breaking Into Your Heart
Teen · XanaTrygg
Hot hot hot!!
Fangirling so bad rn!
"Don't take those words back." He removed his hand, lowering it until he touched her restless hands. "I—" he breathed in and out, "I like how they sound."
Breaking Into Your Heart
Teen · XanaTrygg
I don't know you, but I think MJ is kinda hot!
I really like the characters, they all have their unique personality. Also, I-m enjoying your writing style. Keep up with the hard work [img=recommend]
My prayers have been heard! I was SOOO curious about Kyle and Cass' story. I knew there was something going on in there!! Need more chaptersss!!
Like Strawberry Candy
Teen · XanaTrygg