I like that you described more on how Ilyana’s limbo dimension works
Don’t underestimate 12 year olds writing even tho they can be quite bad
Amidst the surreal tension that hung in the air, John's voice remained steady, his words dripping with a strange mix of mockery and criticism. His gestures and expressions emphasized the absurdity of the situation. He gestured broadly, sweeping his arm as he spoke. "Honestly, even the villain in a fantasy novel written by a 12-year-old would have better motives."
Evolution begins with an ant colony
Fantasy · Zurbluris
These last charpters are so well written.
In a heartbeat, both mortal and god transcended the limitations of their forms. They moved with a speed that defied the laws of nature, their weapons colliding in a cataclysmic clash that sent shockwaves rippling through the underworld.
Evolution begins with an ant colony
Fantasy · Zurbluris
I dont think Dao meant it in any bad way
With a nod, Akun turned his attention to the system. "Initiate the evolution process for all of them using the ten most powerful beast souls we have." The system's response was swift, yet loaded with anticipation.
Evolution begins with an ant colony
Fantasy · Zurbluris
I can swallow a bottle of alcohol and I'll feel like Godzilla Lyrics: Godzilla Made by Eminem
Darius clenched his teeth, his hands shaking as he fought to stand steady. "You... you monster!" he exclaimed, his voice filled with a mix of fear and anger.
Evolution begins with an ant colony
Fantasy · Zurbluris
Probably just chilling underground. Who knows
With newfound confidence and excitement, Akun followed Leona's lead as they gracefully walked vertically downward from the wall, heading towards the ant hill.
Evolution begins with an ant colony
Fantasy · Zurbluris
Better start early before the coming loss
The table fell silent for a moment as each member weighed the pros and cons. The weight of their financial struggles hung heavy in the air. Eventually, Elara spoke up, "Well, if it means we can finally get out of this mess, I'm in. Let's give it a shot."
Evolution begins with an ant colony
Fantasy · Zurbluris
Says the person, who could only think of a uno reverse card to save himself. After not being able to get what he wanted in the start.
In the midst of the chaos, Akun's voice rang out once more, "You see, in a gamer's imagination, the possibilities are endless!"
Evolution begins with an ant colony
Fantasy · Zurbluris
I somehow read this rhyme as a rap, idk about others or is it just me?
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Evolution begins with an ant colony
Fantasy · Zurbluris
These charpters are so good. Author has really put thought into the storyline
X-Men: Feral Progeny (Marvel AU/What If?)
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