ApproachingStorm

Story has avoided most cliches, but that's about the only good thing I can say about it. MC is edgy, yet it only takes him less than 50 chapters to completely give up on revenge (And apparently gets together with the girl who's boyfriend ruined his life). He gets so many stats and upgrades and seems so OP but is always rather losing every fight or requiring the power of friendship to win and just barely at that, as he always seems to faint and wake up days later after every fight. There seems to be some semblance of a deeper plot and some mystery, but having read stories like this one before (not cliche, but not unique either) it seems more like the grand reveal will be abrupt and disappointing, fizzling out like a spark exposed to water, a surprisingly good synecdote for the novel as a whole, starting good then drowning in unnecessary complication. I would like to leave it off on a good note though. I can see that there is passion behind this story, it doesn't just boringly copy every trope before it. The actual writing quality is decent too. But the plot's over complication and the unlikability of the characters sours the novel's taste. I would honestly recommend writing something very similar to this, as it is an amazing premise, but maybe consider adding depth to characters if you're going to make them unlikable. Because I'm fine with hating characters who are well written, like Shakespeare's Iago, but any hatred I feel for these vessels, just redirects itself onto the author, leading me to this review. Anyway, that's enough from me, good potential from a good writer, poor (in my opinion) execution. (Also forgot to mention a lot of unnecessary complications like getting hunted by ppl from other timelines, does nothing for the plot other than getting to know one character who is probably different in this timeline anyway, and wasting 20 chapters worth of coins) Bye and good luck

Can't expect much from a solo levelling fan fiction. Author denys it but read maybe 10 chapters and tell me I'm wrong (as long as you've actually read solo levelling). If you haven't read solo levelling you'll enjoy it but it's a carbon copy but with skeletons instead of shadows for those who have.