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'No rest for the golden.'
Elden Ring : Godrick The Golden
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Yea me too, its like I wrote this novel before... Must be my imagination...
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
Harry potter is definitely on the list, I am just worried that they will be to powerful by the time they would go there. I am dead set on heading to Skyrim first and they can get very powerful from that world. Though as long as everyone is OK with an overpowered MC(s)...
4. I'm like 90% sure what world I want to go to first as it will give a decent power boost for Saphira and has a better magic system that will be more fun to write about, but I still want your ideas just in case I am missing an amazing world that would fit my criteria or they could end up as the world after the first. please note that worlds with a boat load of lore that I don't know like One Piece will not be an option because I would never be able to do the original work justice.
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
Yea it is kinda forced I agree. But a lot of the readers that first commented wanted Saphira to be the love interest so I kinda just wrote what came to my brain.
When the light fades, Eragon hesitantly opens his eyes and sees a humanoid dragon staring down at him, her glowing blue eyes looking at him with barely hidden lust.
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
Yea I might add elements of dnd into the novel from time to time. I wish I had a better understanding of the lore of some of the core campaigns as that would be a good world to go to.
1. I feel that Saphira is going to fall behind in power level compared to Eragon. I have a few ideas for how to improve her strength when they head into the multiverse but I would still like your opinions on what I can do to help her from within the confines of a Eragon/LOTR world.
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
Dragons develop faster then humans and because in the novel she was in heat at this time it makes her a legal age... I do understand that maturity and age are two different things but alot of the other readers suggested she be the love interest.
Eragon slowly closes his eyes, not realizing that he was projecting his thoughts to Saphira. The scales on her face where her cheeks would be have somehow changed color, developing a rosy hue.
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
Thanks for the chapter! keep up the good work, Author-Sama!!!
ch 19 Ch-19: Fortunes of War: Foundations and Frontlines
In Marvel as a Skeleton
Anime & Comics · Berserk_Asura
Saphira, I choose you! Use dragon breath! 'proceeds to breath fire on the poor rodent in front of her for an hour.'
6. in the far future, after they travel to a world or two, I was thinking of doing a joke world as a side story. Like Yu-Gi-Oh but when they arrive Saphira turns into a duel monsters card and Eragon gets a deck with custom cards with the characters, items, and locations from the novels. so your ideas for joke side stories would also be appreciated.
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
Oh! I love that anime. That is definitely a contender for a world that they can go to. That style of magic system is exactly what I want.
2. I Have come to hate the Eragon magic system with a passion. High tier mage battles are just who has the weakest mind or the most Eldunari. You just make wards for anything that your opponent can do to try and kill you but have all of that prep work be invalidated by just having more energy then the other person. and all of that is inconsequential when you take into consideration that wild magic just goes through any ward you make, even if they use the true name of the ancient language. so what I am asking is, do I get rid of the ancient language and wild magic when Eragon heads to LOTR and make up a magic system that is more LOTR friendly, Or do I keep what I have until he heads into the multiverse?
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
I have wanted to give Saphira a humanoid form at some point in the story. Especially because it allows her to be a love interest as well.
ch 26 Chapter 26
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
I meant the duration. even if dragons have bigger lungs they shouldn't be able to breath fire indefinitely...
Saphira, on the other hand, has been training with Glaedr, teaching her about the history of their kind, how to use air currents to make flight less strenuous, and having her breath fire for hours at a time without stopping. (Yes this doesn't make sense but it's what's written in the books sooo…)
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
in the future I plan to send them to other universes.
"I knew Angela was secretly a powerful person but I never suspected she would know that I had knowledge from another world. Even in the novels it is hinted that she is more than she appears. And what is with this prophecy? I have to find two rings and some kind of gemstone for my true journey to begin. Are you telling me that this is just the tutorial? This whole world and whatever is across the sea is just a stepping stone in my journey? Who is pulling the strings of my life like it's some kind of sick puppet show?"
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
that would be Malkor, Sauron was his lieutenant.
Eragon stares into the distance. "Lord of the Rings…"
RE: Eragon
Book&Literature · Undeadwizard7
Love the novel so far. keep up the good work!!!
ch 10 Shattered Arc
Elden Ring : Godrick The Golden
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