Thanks for the input! I will consider doing a poll in the future if I'm uncertain about something, but for now your words have made me quite confident with the current pacing. I guess it's a bit difficult to judge the pacing and perhaps other elements of the story from the author's perspective. Anyway, thank you for your constant support and have a nice day :)
I've thought about calories before (Drai ate a lot of meat back at home) but haven't considered it for further down the story. Thanks for the reminder! Although I don't think it will be noteworthy enough as a plot point, I might include it in passing or in the details. I'm a bit concerned about the pacing of the plot (I'm afraid it's too slow for some readers), so I might glance at the details regarding locations or even during conversations (I'll still try to make them sound rather realistic). What do you think? Is the pacing too slow for you?
I hadn't thought about that but it's definitely similar to that, minus the kids
I searched for the lyrics and it led to a pretty amusing music video lol
You're welcome! Thank you for the support :)
I'm glad you enjoy them. You're welcome!
You're welcome! Sorry for the late update, I've been feeling under the weather these couple days
That was the intention. Thankfully it did slap
"Christopher Leopold Titus Jean-Claude Maglan!"
Seed of Titan
Fantasy · Bosaliong
Don't worry, he'll lose his naivety as he experience the world more. But I don't know if he can be as smart as Christo. His genes are lacking :P
"Then it's all good," Drai replied as he smiled. Now he wouldn't have to think hard whenever Jian talked.
Seed of Titan
Fantasy · Bosaliong
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original Seed of Titan
In the year 2000, the System arrived on Gaia and changed the world of mankind. The environment became volatile and organisms evolved. To the humans, the System offered a class-base progression with a myriad of skills just like in old RPG games. From magic to bloodlines, as long as people immersed themselves in their passions, the System would incorporate their interests into classes and skills. And with the rise of new powerhouses, old nations were brought down and new ones rose from the ashes, stabilizing and governing their evolved populace. Around 500 years later since the dawn of the System, the story of our MC began. Drai was a musclehead, and his days were mostly spent for two purposes: becoming stronger and tougher! With his single-mindedness and crazy trainings he was finally offered a special class on the Revelation Day. From there on, his journey began. Starting from a prestigious academy and meeting his mentor and new friends, each with their own peculiarities, Drai steadily walked the path of power and invincibility. Party adventures, dark schemes, and veiled threats would accompany Drai throughout his journey.37 Chs 227 Koleksi
You're welcome! I've been slightly struggling in writing the recent chapters due to all the occurring developments, but I hope it's still enjoyable for all of the readers. Thank you for your support :)
Seed of Titan
Fantasy · Bosaliong