Lencana 2
Moments 9
DaoistIY3lzN
You do everything because the character is a Luffy fan and presumably you're going to leave all of Luffy's opportunities to Luffy instead of taking advantage of them yourself.
DaoistIY3lzN
I tell you not to do the same thing as all the fanfics of helping Luffy rescue Ace or help him. It seems that you depend on Luffy and you are surely going to kill Blackbeard and help Whitebeard regain his health.
DaoistIY3lzN
psychopath?? What does psycho have to do with the comment I made?
DaoistIY3lzN
Brother, for what you are doing, I prefer that you directly join the straw hat crew.
DaoistIY3lzN
did you delete some chapters?
DaoistIY3lzN
mushoku tensei
DaoistIY3lzN
is this fanfic cancelled? or the author can not upload more chapters??
DaoistIY3lzN
what happened to the chapters?
Have you even read the original book? It's truly garbage: the dialogues and narrations are repetitive and of low quality. If you only come here to write negative reviews like this one and others you usually write, you'd better save your comments. Although this book is not the translator's own work, it is much more pleasant to read and exciting compared to the original. They seem like two completely different books.
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