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2022-12-01 Bergabung Global

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MetalMilitia
Replied to Some_Random_O_O

I guess facial expression?

MetalMilitia
Replied to _Eidolon_

Its a common trope i guess...

MetalMilitia
Commented

i hate the fact that they call their brother "brother". I always used his name with mine. I don't get it why she should call him brother. This is not a complain against the book, i just hate this thing that its universal. No hard feeling author!

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Re: Evolution Online

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

MetalMilitia
Commented

Ok. How does he know he returned to three years in the past? At least make him check!

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Re: Evolution Online

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

MetalMilitia
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Ok, let's start from here. The author is good. He can write; he can keep the pace neither too fast nor too slow. I only have praise for him. But, to be honest, this story doesn't bring anything new to the genre. It is the usual story with the MC, who constantly gets cheat power-ups throughout the story, and that's it. Also, it is based on the usual tropes: power-up, cold MC, people scared of him or respectful of him, academy study, teleportation event (like Mushoku Tensei), demon invasion, and the like. MC basically didn't interact with anyone but his father a couple of times; the other characters are, frankly, nonexistent, and the ones that appeared are forgettable. To be honest, I did expect the true story to begin once he went to the academy and interacted with the novel's MC, but that didn't happen because of the teleportation event. Now, I know how hard it is to write a novel, and as I said, the author is very good at writing and storytelling, but I feel like he could have spent a little more time thinking about the setting before starting the novel. Don't get me wrong; people who started reading recently and do not know how many novels out there are like this one may actually like it, but for people like me, who have read countless novels, this is just another copy-pasted work. To be honest, I don't really blame the author since this is what most people on this website like to read, and as far as I've seen, he is doing a great job. just not my cup of tea. In my opinion, the world-building is so-so, and the update schedule is not that great. The author publishes a chapter a day, from what I've seen, but many others out there upload two chapters a day, sometimes even more. I won't say don't read this, but if you do, do not expect anything out of the ordinary. I apologize to the author if he gets offended by my review, but I think that anything said by readers will be helpful to him (and other authors) in the future.

MetalMilitia
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Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel

Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel

Fantasy · chaotic_1

MetalMilitia
Replied to moonmirror

relax dude

'The cravion kingdom.... isn't that from that novel..? even the melvix family, wasn't that one of the noble families which played an important role at the middle of the novel...?'

Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel

Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel

Fantasy · chaotic_1

MetalMilitia
Commented

It is a little bit messy to be honest

[Please comment and tell me your current opinion of this chapter and the one's leading to it]

Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

Fantasy · Emmanuel_Peter203

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