EasternRiver

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Story is easy to understand, used words are simple and story flows neither fast neither slow Story is updated I think 1-2 chapters per day? That’s what every novel reader wish for The idea is unique, there are of course stories with dungeon and constellation, but we finally got plot with gods and mythology. Characters are excellently written, finally side characters that have story and give feeling like normal human beings with soul. There wasn’t introduced much world background to the last chapter. We know about dungeons, awakeners, guilds and gods, but we are only on the 47 chapter so it’s still early. There are 2 things that give me bitter taste First is his sister. The point of her being assaulted doesn’t make much sense for me. In the end mc kills the person who did that, but he would do that anyway for his ”teacher” and he is so kind and sympathetic that his aftermatch and cocktail of emotion would be half the same.(maybe more?) But it’s still understandable for me, author didn’t want bro/sis relationship(thumbs up) and the trauma made her attracted to women. But what makes no sense to me at all and I can’t stand is his ex(Melanie I think), most of the time when girlfriend appears in first chapter, the story goes 2 ways. 1) She just leaves for money(lifestyle) which happens most of the time 2) She leaves for money to save someone, but that rarely happens(this novel is example) Good novels, where girlfriend starts in first chapter and sticks to the end are almost nonexistent. It’s like there are no banks, no loans, communication doesn’t exist just jump straight into arms of some douche. Ok, I could still go with the flow but why bring her back, she put a green hat on him, broke his heart, almost killed him and he gave her superpowers and even feels guilty. About what bloody hell? She made her bed, sleep in it. He is like a kid, kind and mentally weak child with gun and after training he is like a child with rocket launcher. That’s why I love exedra, mc with balls who knows how the world works, but maybe that’s why I have such prejudice. Exedra is the type of mc for me I will wait until ex wakes up and probably stop reading after, but I can’t wait for the next chapters of your second book. For the people who don’t care, this is one of the best novel you can find on Webnovel Peace and keep up the good work