Can't you make MC who has transmigrate have some Cheat but not overpowered well like his mana and reserves increase 10x then normal dev. It will really be interesting to read with this addition as it gives MC an edge over others.
Well author Let's just say you have my
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Great Story but can you try to make story more integrated with the flow to story, eg please don't use the headings and title to focus out the paragraph of story and just make it flow more natural as with headers it looks more GPT generated and there was repetition in between. But still a solid story and just make his hero and civilian persona more distinct as both having green theme and advance tech will have SHEILD AND HYDRA at his back
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Hey author can you please make omnitrix invisible mode so no one can get suspicious. As Fury would already have a profile on him as and every details from hairstyle to shoes so an ODD watch will surely gain his attention and all the geniuses in world will figure it out in no time and also make the Omnitrix symbol when transform in invisible also as it will be very easy to find out the identity. PLZ AUTHOR TAKE MY SUGGESTION BECAUSE MANY BEN 10 FIC THAT ARE IN MARVEL OR DC MAKE THIS MISTAKE.
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You know after watching the Tensura manga and anime I always thought that rimuru is very passive and can't take action until major destruction has happened in his life and kingdom and I think as former human it was accounted that it would happen but still MC has watched what has happened in this strength based world and still thinks of creating a GOVERNMENT 😮💨😮💨. you kown after reading your comments author I just think why did I started this fiction
"I understand but I have no intention of making servants off you all. Just friends who want to live peacefully and ensure others get that chance. Rather than a king or an alpha, I think I prefer the term Chancellor. That way, I'll have a council making decisions and not just me.
That Time I Got Reincarnated By Veldanava
Anime & Comics · Omni_God2000
wtf!!! bro, this is a fantasy story why are you making it another earth government genre this should be kingdom building and this how king behave a democratic country. We read this fiction to escape these real world problems and find enjoyment in such story of nation building why are ruining this 😮💨😮💨. And wtf is they should only bow to Veldanava it's good that he respects him as all should but look at Guy and Rudra they are closer to him but still don't think like that.
"I understand but I have no intention of making servants off you all. Just friends who want to live peacefully and ensure others get that chance. Rather than a king or an alpha, I think I prefer the term Chancellor. That way, I'll have a council making decisions and not just me.
That Time I Got Reincarnated By Veldanava
Anime & Comics · Omni_God2000
Helll Yeah!!!!
I think the thing that made writing this story so hard was that I spent half my time scouring the MCU wiki for timeline information to try to stick to it, which killed my motivation. I've decided to say screw all of that, and just build my own Marvel Universe with its own timeline. This will no longer be conforming to MCU timeline, and I'm going to draw from different versions of the Marvel universe as I continue this story, so I don't just follow the rails of the movies.
Marvel's Osmosian
Anime & Comics · Sp4rrow
No problem good luck for your exam👍
This fic is catfishing the readers, the title says anti hero but the way story progress is more like everyday DC hero, man I was hoping for something good in anti hero but same old thing is repeated and it's chap is AI generated like why write when you only want to copy AI, since AI generated offent don't generate the dark content as some kind of policy. Still, author if you want to write something then take inspiration from AI and form the chapters in your way. Most of the time the authors use AI to generate unique powers and abilities and form story around that
Is he never going to kill such people???