Ivivion

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A potato who is just here to write stuff. Enjoy <3

2022-11-05 Bergabung United States
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Ivivion
Ivivion
2 months ago
Commented

Good slow burn. Though, the italicized font would make me feel confused. Usually it would be used as a recap rather than a whole sequence. Or a device uses for thought. Use of vague descriptions and also survival techniques were basic, they are also effective in real life. So this chapter is a good start to what may come to be a very auspiciously well written piece.

Ivivion
Ivivion
4 months ago
Replied to HomieLv1

Thank you so much!! <3 ;(

Ivivion
Ivivion
4 months ago
Posted

I do enjoy the novel but I am not the main audience with the belief of the whole Alpha and such. The prose in describing the foreground and background were so well done I felt the cold. Very intrigued about a 1st person POV as well.

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Ivivion
Ivivion
4 months ago
Commented

I like the first person POV. Very enticing and it makes me want to read more. Oh man I can't wait what comes next!

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Ivivion
Ivivion
11 months ago
Posted

Feels like reading an anime for each scene the writer made. It was so good ah my brain is excited that it might explode owo. it's like eating your plate of pizza rolls and when you get to the last update. you run out of pizza rolls but you know the next time you go to the store you can make more pizza rolls.

Ivivion
Ivivion
Ivivion
11 months ago
Commented

bruh let's go mah ocd tendency for a redo kicking in best thing ever best boi Porter Perv

Ivivion
Ivivion
11 months ago
Commented

ahem. Revenge of Healer? Naw!!! Revenge of Porter??!

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Ivivion
Ivivion
1 years ago
Posted

Though vague, the MC's perspective is really well thought out in the beginning. Not a lot of novels write in details of their MC's philosophy in the first chapter. Overall I cannot wait to finish the rest of the other chapters.

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Ivivion
Ivivion
1 years ago
Commented

I like to make Calamari :> thank me