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thanks for the chapter

if you ever want to give Mo Fan a new move and nothing comes to mind just give him rasengan with 7 different elements or all in one (just don't add kekkai genkai) Also thanks for the chapter

If you are setting up plot for the meridians, you are doing a great job. Also thanks for the chapter

Try to make a martial peak version of black flash cz black flash creates a spatial distortion and there is space dao in martial peak so it would be new to see some space-time martial arts rather than just long range attacks seen in martial peak And it would be a great idea to give space-time cleave and dismantle to the mc rather than the moon blade of Yang Kai Also thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

i do however think you could separate the golden dragon and ice phoenix inheritance and make it a non dual cultivation inheritance but connected by fate and stuff and give phoenix source to someone from ice palace in star boundary or anyone you wish and i apologize if i am asking too many questions or interfering too much into the direction you want to lead the story to( i am just too invested in it being one of the first good fic of martial peak)

well that is in a good too but i was just curious what you are thinking about golden dragon inheritance and soul warming lotus? as after getting both of these yang kai's prowess would probably be insurmountable until the end and even in the end they can only become equal at most or yang kai more powerful

thanks for the chapter. is xia ning chang x yang kai confirmed ?

i was afraid that it might get dropped but glad you are back and thank you for the chapter

thank you for the chapter, and i was thinking that the current pace at which you release chapters is good ( keeping the current length in mind) and very sustainable because it doesn't make me wait a whole week and also makes me eager to check for new chapters every other day too but i think the pace of the story is a bit slow but may be you could be planning for a faster pace after settling the foundation of mc's growth in the future so i would love it if you could pick the pace up after a few chapters

jiu feng etc*

thanks for the chapter. i don't know what you intend to do with yang kai but if you wish to keep him as a friendly rival or something you can try to pair his sister(make her only a few years younger than yang kai and an adult by the time its time to live for the starry sky) with the mc so that they won't fall out for greed or anything. also apart from su yan(golden dragon source is a must for body cultivation above dao seal realm and high vitality for limb and organ regeneration) and xia ning chang(alchemy dao is necessary) you can try to pair other girls with mc rather than the one who were with yang kai but could have had huge potential like yang yan, lan you ruo, jiu feng etc