Evan_Neuhaus

I am just about to start. Reading this book. I am if he because of the whole. It has a system thing. Because when a writer adds a system to their novel, they usually use it as a cracks. But it seems to be a good writer, so I'm gonna give it a shot. For example, for what I mean. When a character has a system , it's usually like hey , my abilities are useless , but tihis system now mixed super overpie. That's not the j being good or useful.That's the system. And again don't use this comment.I haven't ride the store yet. I don't really expect anyone to really read.Or care about this comment.This is just me getting my thoughts on paper. And so I can see how it changes Now just some general criticism on the System genre Is usually just the main character.Has the system , it would be If every character had answers to the system in Because that way it is not just I have some magical tool that makes me Better than everyone else Makes that more subtle at least in my brain so yeah Yeah, don't get me wrong.I don't want everyone to fall love this.This is just my personal And is not to be taken as It is really important because it really isn't.I know that And I know doesn't really care how I can set related to this just meeting my thoughts On paper maybe not the best place for it but But a I don't think that a particularly matters just don't read this coming I'm not forcing you. I read all the comments that I could before and compliments. I saw like one really big string about some guy who laughed a combo like system. Bad, some other ones are saying this is a good fact. I'm just leaving a comment now. Before I start reading. I'm not gonna add a review to this comment. This is just a comment. So please don't judge me and if the grammar is bad, I'm disliked so.

The hygiene is fair. I hope the story. I like this story.

this story is amasing. I hop you fell good sun[img=update][img=recommend]

You're evil for leaving me off on that cliff haircut. I've been waiting for this interaction for ages. Now, this one is making yourections that I'm going for since he came back to glee universe. You just had to cut it all right , before it's about to really happen , you're evil

I am glad you are back and thank you very much for the chapter.

like the new design