too much explanation, we have seen bleach so no need for explanation.
too much explanation like the author is teaching as ninjutsu[img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
you do know a swords man don't need devil fruit right?
"Anko, I possess some great massage techniques; would you be interested?"
Anime & Comics · NoviceAuthor
why.🥲🥲🥲
As the seasons changed and ten months passed on Bamboo Peak, the once vibrant greens of the forest slowly gave way to the rich hues of autumn, then to the stark whiteness of winter, before the gentle thaw of spring brought new life once more. Each season painted the peak with its unique charm—autumn's crisp air and falling leaves, winter's silent snow-covered landscape, and spring's blossoming flowers and warming sunlight.
Anime & Comics · Devilsatan
you know it is kinda boring to not starting to get to the point of the story . i think you don't know the plot yourself
you are repeating the same thing for three short chapters
you are writing the same thing in different way in three chapters
he is a reincarnator right
it's good and the translation are also good.
BTTH: The Legend Of Xiu Emperor
Anime & Comics · Ankar4kitzu