"There is nothing we can do."
Surviving the Deadliest Magic Academy
Fantasy · Gardbet
Oh my days, I have all my respect towards the great writing quality. I am not usually interested in this type of genre but I'm hooked to yours. Gonna spend my free time reading this beauty.
Honestly the story is quite good in it's own way, but I do recommend that the way you structure dialogue should be consistent cause you kept switching from [ ] to ' ' which was... questionable. But overall it's a good read. I just hope that it doesn't take the generic isekai route.
Yup I knew it, this is an isekai. Gonna see how it goes. Better not be generic.
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Unbounded Ruler of Death
Fantasy · Akemi_Kyoshi
Thank you for the review and don't worry there will be more chapters on their way. If you don't mind please share in case there might be people who could like this.
With great hope and "focus" I can somewhat see this becoming a really great story in the future, so I hope that the update stability will not be a great issue.
Sorry for late reply, but sure.
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Honestly this is a good read. The start was really funny for me but it set up the story pretty well so I got kinda hooked. Keep up the good work. And by the way the way you write is really good, dialogue is separated properly.
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You definitely meant head right? But she got what was coming to her
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Dad is just tryna make him understand that her back gonna get blown out and he has to live with that. Harsh but true.
"Dhormu."
Surviving the Deadliest Magic Academy
Fantasy · Gardbet