nobita is becoming little by little like his old self in ch-12 he was like he only cared about his close one in ch-22 he becoming like his old self. make him more OC and skipping his training is a good or bad plot hole you you deside . to left my final conclousion of writing this comment is to express more deployment on nobita character and make him more ooc. And good writing this story Best of luck
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you writing is quite good i only feel you should add more characters for movie and other work of Fujiko F. Fujio and write more stable besides that this book is good
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i use all my 3 stones
How about a cultivation world we mc can use his own power not doreamon gadgets how about:- Spare me great lord
you are a god to us woh wanted to read dark novel every work you done is soo good
lord Ganesha
I don't think this needs to be asked but who do you think the second person is?
I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.
Fantasy · ForManaga
I think you should take time writing chapters
the story is great but updating is now that
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just because you are original no translation a Chinese Naruto fanfic
In Konoha, This Naruto Has Decided To Take It Easy
Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy