Helka

Helka

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I am here for Under The Oak Tree. Maybe I’ll write someday.

2022-08-08 Bergabung Global
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Moments 18
Helka
Helka
1 years ago
Commented

Great chapter ❤️

Helka
Helka
1 years ago
Replied to Noktocielo

I have the same theory 🤭

Helka
Helka
1 years ago
Commented

Is it hot in here or, is it just me?

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"Ah!" Annalise gasped as his right knee was placed between her legs, dangerously close to a place it shouldn't be near ever. She didn't have to guess that he was also thinking of her with a lack of clothing. 

The Knight's Mysterious Maid

The Knight's Mysterious Maid

History · Violet_167

Helka
Helka
1 years ago
Commented

This is going to be fun, I look forward to the next chapter 🤭😅

Helka
Helka
1 years ago
Commented

This chapter is so sweet ❤️

Helka
Helka
1 years ago
Commented

Better indeed 😉

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"What if I were to suddenly need you? Wouldn't it be much better to have you near?"

The Knight's Mysterious Maid

The Knight's Mysterious Maid

History · Violet_167

Helka
Helka
1 years ago
Commented

Beatrice getting so ahead of herself 🤣

"My grandchildren," Beatrice clapped her hands. 

The Knight's Mysterious Maid

The Knight's Mysterious Maid

History · Violet_167

Helka
Helka
1 years ago
Commented

You should avoid using the word ”okay” for it doesn’t fit an historical setting. Instead, depending on the context, you could use: yes, alright, fine, of course, I shall, as you wish…

Helka
Helka
1 years ago
Commented

I kind of feel inconfortable with the plot at this point. I think I would have preferred that the ML may have to marry the FL to protect her (with actual good reasons) but that story then builds up their relationship towards trust and consent leading the both of them to intimacy. I do not find enjoyable to read that both their consent was thrown out to the window to excuse their first night together. The use of an aphrodisiac potion that leads to death unless the victim has intimate relations with anyone feels very arbitrary and disturbing…

Helka
Helka
1 years ago
Commented

I have just binge read your novel and I look forward to reading the next chapters ❤️