Lgknight

Funny enough at the beginning of this fic and how you were explaining Morgan’s backstory a though crossed my mind that Merlin, Uthur, and Vivian were the main root of why everything fell apart after artoria’s uncle past away Merlin for being Merlin, I don’t think I need to explain this. Uthur for a few reason if I remember the way you portrayed him. He not only lied about Morgan’s mother being well but told her that the baby had gone with her mother to the after life. The the baby that Morgan was depressed about shows up and acts more like her father then a girl from that period which led to insane Morgan seeing her as uthur and not artoria. Also the fact that she was the first born and artoria was a women but she the first princess and rightful heir to the kingdom was cast aside for a stupid political play. Then vivian which could be seen as the root of Morgan’s evil ways but the. Again she didn’t for Morgan but merely saw the results of her actions from splitting herself and making Morgan go insane. All in all I see these there reason why everything went wrong after the white dragon fell. At least in your AU of fate.

I think this was the sign you were talking about Allister being more aligned with Morgan than Artoria. Who didn’t do anything about the fall of her family? I cannot say how she would have viewed it in this instance, but you can get what I’m talking about. So, it's a pretty good chapter. We got the romance-like scene with Morgan and Allister, breakfast with the family, and the harlot and her minion, along with Allister showing off his Morgan side and letting have some more playthings. [changed Sola-Ui to Harlot instade of Allister's words that he used to describe her]

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Funny enough, I do not think that I have used crude language, and when I do, it's mostly just an f-bomb, but I'll post the chapter review on my laptop this time. But yes, I'm guessing that I can't post and comment on my phone because I have that I have commented on a good portion of the chapters, but it never gets seen like I'm the only one who did get a like or you responded to my comments. Happens with others, too,

hey, I just wanted to ask if you can see my previous comment for this chapter. if you can't, don't worry. I'll comment more on my computer than my phone, but if you're just ignoring them, then I understand.

Honestly this version of Morgan to me makes more sense. Am I’m rooting for her. This doesn’t not make me forget what she’s done but from your version she basically went insane and now and properly think and with how allister isn’t treating her like Merlin and the rest of the male population at that time, in addition to the way you are wrapping this up. I like it a lot. I am curious if she will create an actual body or go the Gilgamesh route and me incarnated if that’s possible. Also if he goes with both female routes does this change the fact that he will or won’t be a necrophiliac