Player369

California was 5 hours away, but the office is only an hour away. really

It can be an eight hour flight between California and New York. Another thing that bothered me was a 10 month pregnancy. A pregnancy is 9 months.

I can't stop laughing.

You start reading, and then you get locked out until you buy coins or something. The story is interesting but confusing. The writer needs an editor to iron out his thoughts, so the writing is clear and not confusing. Sorry. I still want to finish story.