I like your writing skills as I was immersed in the chapter the whole time. if you continue writing you will definitely make it big (and you will easily get money and fame from just this novel).
i will try to improve what you have pointed out
thanks a lot
It looks great from the first chapters hope you continue the work. Hope you reach the top. **********************************************************************
thank you very much
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Yo! shameless author here. For now, just writing for fun, not fully devoted to work. Updates will not be very regular but I will try to upload at least 20 chapters a month. My English is just so-so, therefore it will contain some grammatical errors. I am open to suggestions and I will surely correct the errors. This work is not for people who look for accuracy in their Novels. For people reading the novel -Please comment on what you want to see in the upcoming chapters. As I have just started writing and I don't know where to take the story, there are many ideas in my mind about the story and I am not sure which will be the best. So please let me know if you have any ideas for the story or anything you want to add to the story. Thank you all
Sorry to dear readers, I am currently preparing for my exams so I am not able to write new chapters as I promised( to do at least 20 chapters a month). Partially because my writing skills are not good and it is taking very much time to just write one chapter. Therefore chapters will be published randomly.
The Lost Sanity
Fantasy · The_Forgotten_Sage