MonarchOfAbsolute

MonarchOfAbsolute

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Hi, im starting my own web novel. If you read it, please leave some comments and advice so that I know how to improve :) Hope you enjoy ! - MonarchOfAbsolute

2022-07-05 Bergabung Global
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MonarchOfAbsolute
MonarchOfAbsolute
1 years ago
Replied to ChocolateCat301

Lol you're really saying "dont say anything about my writing style, but critics are welcome"... Like this is a novel brah... Apart from that, nice story man ! :)

MonarchOfAbsolute
MonarchOfAbsolute
1 years ago
Posted

Obviously I like it since it's my own story 😁 Nyahahahaha ! You cant stop me from giving myself a 5-star review puny humans !

MonarchOfAbsolute
MonarchOfAbsolute
1 years ago
Replied to Priest_Yuri

Yep 😁

MonarchOfAbsolute
MonarchOfAbsolute
1 years ago
Replied to MonarchOfAbsolute

Maybe later in the story though...

MonarchOfAbsolute
MonarchOfAbsolute
1 years ago
Replied to Priest_Yuri

No why ?

MonarchOfAbsolute
MonarchOfAbsolute
1 years ago
Replied to DemonTime999

OK thanks XD

[SUPREME POWER: PORTAL CREATION {LIMITS: CAN ONLY CREATE A PORTAL TO A PLACE YOU HAVE NEVER VISITED.}]

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Fantasy · DemonTime999

MonarchOfAbsolute
MonarchOfAbsolute
1 years ago
Posted

I really like the story so far, I think it has great potential. Writing quality could be improved a little bit (some grammar mistakes here and there, I can tell you're not a native english speaker), but apart from that, this story is really great and i'm excited to see where it goes. :)

MonarchOfAbsolute
MonarchOfAbsolute
1 years ago
Commented

Another impractical power XD Also, how is he gonna set up a portal to places if he can't go there ??

[SUPREME POWER: PORTAL CREATION {LIMITS: CAN ONLY CREATE A PORTAL TO A PLACE YOU HAVE NEVER VISITED.}]

Tp,,,,

Tp,,,,

Fantasy · DemonTime999

MonarchOfAbsolute
MonarchOfAbsolute
1 years ago
Commented

I really like the story's pacing, it's not too fast or too slow :)

MonarchOfAbsolute
MonarchOfAbsolute
1 years ago
Commented

I don't understand the Creator's Thoughts at all lol. Is it just me ? Am I just dumb ? :')

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