i gotta say, this book sure takes me back. I feel like watching Bleach again .but anyways back to the reviewing ,the writing is good and pacing makes it easy to follow also the background is freakin amazing. my only problem with the book is it's long paragraphs, i don't know for others by for me with poor eyesight , it's hard to read it throughly so I suggest split the paragraphs and that's all. thanks for the great book
Thanks so much for your detailed review , I'll do my best to not disappoint
thanks for the review
The story starts of great, The details that went into the scenes make one imagine the very clearly and so far the character development doesn't disappoint... But please, shorten u paragraphs or put some space between them, it's easy to get lost while reading such a long paragraph.Still, the story is good, so keep up the work
am re-writing it, also am the original author u can check my profile/account u'll still find the other book
a 20 fold is added at the second stage, and a 30 on the 3rd stage and so on
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The writing is great, love the beginning of the story, makes you want to read more of it, but as an author myself it would help if u limited the use of he said or she said, but the overall plot and writing is spot on
am sorry but what's an AE
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I've been doing my best to improve my grammar, I've also been told it's a problem from my other stories . but anyway thank u for honest review ,I'll work even harder on it
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original Valkron's Vampire God
Hinata Fujuzuki,a middle age japanese man who through some misfortune had an untimely and suffocating death. But at the end of his life, a voice, that of artificial intelligence gave him a promise. The promise of compensation for his gruesome death, compensation through reincarnation. Now reborn in a new world, he is accompanied by a system, THE VALKRON SYSTEM. One of the many systems created by the universe itself, tasked with guiding chosen candidates in their journey to becoming Gods for specific worlds. Now Dubbed Ruthven Highlord, he sets out on his thrilling and slightly long adventure to becoming one of the many Evil Gods the universe has yet to see. [Extra Tags: R18+, Harem, Twisted Mc, Overpowered MC, Reincarnation, Demons, Angeles, Elves, Vampire Mc, Kingdom Building, Conqueror, System, Multi-Personality, Psychopath, Mature Content, , Intelligent Mc, Handsome ML, Villain, Anti-Hero.]33 Chs 87 Koleksi
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The BloodBath System in another World
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I'VE REWRITTEN THE BOOK UNDER A NEW NAME: VALKRON'S VAMPIRE GOD-pleasw check it if u find the synopsis interesting When certain gods reach the age of as little as 10 millenniums, They are now classified as [The Old Gods] and the Time for them to be removed from their position as Gods has come. Known for its unusual truth, the number of Gods in the Cosmos has long exceeded the number of planets which could host then, Hence why Systems were created. The Cosmos wanting to Maintain it's peace and existence created "Systems" Beings who would be responsible for choosing and monitoring [New Gods] who would fight [ The Old Gods] to remove and cut their numbers down. Every 1 000 000 to 10 000 000 years, at random, this event would occur, Ragnarok's wrath they called it. Valkron, One of the many systems in the universe that is responsible for creating gods from scratch, Has now found it's 3rd host since it's creation. In it's Attempt to Transport this potential Host, An interference occured as by some unknown miracle the potential host survived and escaped from the first Transfer Simulation. But this wouldn't stop it as it launched a second grade simulation which was a grade higher than the last, and unlike last time it succeed. But that wasn't the last time such problems occured. The Choose Host seems to have a twisted personality, or is it just his brothers as he calls his condition. Follow The Journeys of The third Host chosen by the Bloodbath system as he conquers and destroys many worlds while collecting a number of beauties to fill his harem. [ Tags: R18+, Harem, Twisted Mc, Overpowered, Reincarnation, Beast girls, Maids, Elves, Vampire Mc, Succubus, Pregnancy, Kingdom Building, Conqueror, System, Mature Content, , Intelligent Mc, Handsome ML, Villain, Anti-Hero.] ...... I'VE REWRITTEN THE BOOK UNDER A NEW NAME: VALKRON'S VAMPIRE GOD2 Chs 111 Koleksi
Shameless Author here, 😁 i gotta review this book after all it's levels above the original and i think I've been doing better than when I was writing my first book. Also don't skip the book without giving it a chance it good.
Valkron's Vampire God
Fantasy · Azurian_Element