DaoistbobU86

DaoistbobU86

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2022-06-02 Bergabung United States
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DaoistbobU86
DaoistbobU86
2 years ago
Replied to scyfly

Thanks for pointing it out. I've tried to edit it to make it seem more like a new version of Harry instead of a partial SI.

DaoistbobU86
DaoistbobU86
2 years ago
Replied to King_Gluttony

The answer is yes. And it won't take too long for him to ascend... maybe... we'll see... (I have no plans)

DaoistbobU86
DaoistbobU86
2 years ago
Replied to Mr_even

It is HP, Marvel and more now... I'm still figuring out my plan for the story.

DaoistbobU86
DaoistbobU86
DaoistbobU86
2 years ago
Replied to scyfly

Right now, I am just aiming to have the Dursleys removed as Harry's muggle guardians. Even if the officer's POV is somewhat useless in the long run, I want to incorporate other people's viewpoints a bit. You could call it a practice run, as I have very little experience writing. Thanks for the comment! :)

DaoistbobU86
DaoistbobU86
2 years ago
Replied to Hees_Gelle

Thanks for the suggestions! I did a little research on what punishment this kind of abuse would cause for the Dursleys and I came up with 8-10 years of prison. I may just cheese it to get them in for longer. I'll aim to get Dudley in military school too. Thanks again :)

DaoistbobU86
DaoistbobU86
2 years ago
Replied to scyfly

Thanks for the input! I just put in the revisions! :)

DaoistbobU86
DaoistbobU86
2 years ago
Replied to scyfly

Thanks for your input! I have been putting thought into what I can change to be better, and those are the things I want to change. I have no plan for this and am just writing for the fun of it. I will be going back to change things that don't make sense.