Thanks for your words, I'll try to do my best <3
Not really, this one I'll drop this because although I have loyal readers, there are only three so far for this novel and it never increased, hence I want to invest that time on another novel, hopefully, with the accumulative experience I'll get better and better at writing and my next one will be better.
He won't sell his cultivation techniques, the only ones he selling are the ones which are already semi-public, like Aurora's one and the organ refining technique ( Taken by that mysterious person from Aurora).
Actually there is no Academy arc
If Yone's experience with people was anything to go by, he was certain that Tom's kindness was nothing more than an attempt to secure protection for when their academy days began.
Fantasy · Choka
I'll fix it thank you
Actually, that's only a one-time thing left by the inheritance itself, the system doesn't give rewards out of nowhere.
same age ye
"It's you huh, my twin older brother." He raised his eyebrows, his expression returning to that of cold indifference. Tom lowered his head and looked at his own toes; this is his signature stance.
Fantasy · Choka
Not skipped, its in fact an important point in the story
They were born from the same womb at the same time, and yet why were the heavens so unfair? Though he was born just minutes before his younger brother, the gap in talent between him and Yone was like the difference between heaven and earth.
Fantasy · Choka
Not true, based on your words almost every novel with same plot and test ground is a clone, and many exist even on top of webnovel. But such similarities always end in the first few chapters so rest assured.
I 100% agree with what you said. It's just that I wasn't enjoying the flow of this story in terms of plot, and it felt inconsistent, so I'll be creating another one where the world is well thought out instead of going by the day if you know what I mean. That one is the one I'll be finishing no matter what.
Master of Amber
Fantasy · Choka