BigCrow

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Worried bout joe mama

2022-05-04 Bergabung United Kingdom
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BigCrow
BigCrow
9 months ago
Commented

Interesting 🤔

BigCrow
BigCrow
9 months ago
Commented

Ngl, I have a bad feeling about this <Hollow> attribute

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BigCrow
BigCrow
2 years ago
Posted

Review after 24 chapters. Inshort: Overall a good read, should give it a try if you like demon mc like novels. Detailed: The premise is unique, there are very few novels with dual system holders and the author has kept it balanced till now. The writing quality is good, could be better. Lacks in character design and world background but fills the gap with intersting story. Action is fine, smuts are good and the novel satisfies the evil character. The character design of Logan the MC needs a little more exposure than Kevin, which I hope the author will do in the near future. Chapter 23 was pretty good and looking forward to how the author will improve.

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BigCrow
BigCrow
2 years ago
Posted

Authorrrrrrr!!! I hate you! you and your cliffhanger!!! you did it on purpose didn't you, I was desperate to see Amanda's reaction in chap 539 and you!!! I really hate you! I mean I love you but I hate you !! important things must be said twice!!