SleepyMao

SleepyMao

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2022-04-23 Bergabung China
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SleepyMao
SleepyMao
6 months ago
Commented

TLX is s bit arrogant.. But I also do that too, so I can't say much.

Tang Li Xue began to examine the giant Queen of the Sea statue closer while commenting in a leisurely tone: "Not bad, the statue of this lady is quite beautiful. Unfortunately, she is still far from being as good-looking as me."

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

SleepyMao
SleepyMao
6 months ago
Commented

Repetitive Description

But when Tang Li Xue saw an over one-hundred-meter-tall stone statue facing the entrance in the middle of the huge bright hall, she quickly took a few steps back in reflex.

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

SleepyMao
SleepyMao
6 months ago
Commented

Does the Author have an obsession with the Word 50,100,etc(insert number) -meter tall when it comes to size? a Short 'Gigantic', 'Enormous', etc would be enough to Describe the height. I'm sorry if this seems like I'm hating but I just want to make my own opinion since the Author has a Repetitive habit

SleepyMao
SleepyMao
6 months ago
Commented

The Author has a bad habit on repeating sentences, I hope the Author learns to fix that. It makes the story feel very Repetitive by writing the same thing too much.

The palpitating horrible aura emitted from the strange creature's body became increasingly terrifying with each passing second as it absorbed the abundant star energy from [Star Gathering Bodhi Tree]'s Star Essence.

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

SleepyMao
SleepyMao
6 months ago
Commented

Were

Each of them was also holding a thick and heavy bone trident in their grasp.

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

SleepyMao
SleepyMao
6 months ago
Commented

idk make a mask, nose plug with her energy manipulation skill thing

SleepyMao
SleepyMao
SleepyMao
6 months ago
Commented

NOOO ANOTHER 'SLIM BIDY' THERE'S THIN, HOURGLASS BUT I'M GOING INSANE WITH SLIM

SleepyMao
SleepyMao
6 months ago
Commented

YESS I'VE FINALLY FINISHED MY EXAMS NOW I CAN CONTINUE READING ON WHAT I'VE MISSED IN THIS NOVEL, I'M COMING BACKKK 😭

SleepyMao
SleepyMao
7 months ago
Commented

I imagined the beautiful lady, with long black hair, and porcelain skin from afar but when you see her closer her skin is rotting and peeling off under her dress, and a corpse like smell is attached to her. The thin fingers she hid under her sleeves are actually claws that are stained in crimson dried red. When she opens her mouth it'll agape like some sort of viper with teeth attached everywhere inside her mouth, and sunken eyes.

The beautiful lady swiftly flashed forward toward Tang Li Xue and forcefully grabbed Tang Li Xue's neck!

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

  • The Female Lead Blackends original

    The Female Lead Blackends

    History REINCARNATION MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN SURVIVAL ISEKAI REVENGE HISTORICAL FACESLAPPING COUNTERATTACK

    PS: ORIGINAL Don't Steal Please ^^ [ Warning: the story might have or not have romance but even so FL wont fall in love nor be in a relationship but if she does it will One-Sided where the FL doesn't fall in love ] !! Warning FL might be Cruel and Greedy if you don't want a scheming FL and instead a Kind FL pls leave!! After Abruptly getting killed by a Car Crash while replying to her Emails she is suddenly Transmigrated as the Abandoned Female Lead or the Big Bad Villainess 'Arella Flora' "Such a Pitiful..Villainess..But what does anything about this have to do with me!? Ah-! is this my Retribution for Greediness?!" Unreasonable Yandere Male Leads and Unreasonable Loyal Puppies/Male Lead: *Kills an Innocent Person for Choe Soo just because she looked at them* Plz Love Me ^^ Choe Soo: *Slaps* Go to Hell! You Lovesick Serial Killer! Bastard, Scummy Male Leads who only gets away with things only because they're hot: *Literally runs the Black-Market and sells people to Slavery and other bad stuff* What about me ^^? Choe Soo: *Kicks* Amitabha Buddha please Save Me!

    8 Chs 30 Koleksi

  • I sit on the Dragon Throne original

    I sit on the Dragon Throne

    History REINCARNATION SYSTEM CULTIVATION TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI REVENGE HISTORICAL FACESLAPPING COUNTERATTACK SIDECHARACTER

    PS: ORIGINAL Don't Steal Please ^^ [Warning: the story might have romance but even so FL wont fall in love nor be in a relathionship but if she does it will be a slowburn] Word Limit: 1200 - 2500 Bad Grammar mistakes(early chapters) [I'm gonna use Chinese slangs so please don't be confuse if you see random things like '555' as it's Chinese slang] Random Quantities a week at random quantities a day between 0 -3 Sorry for slow story and writing Some Mistakes: Zheng Li = Lin Lanfen Song Jiao transmigrated into a Reverse Harem that was also a Mary Sue novel where Women are superior then Men with the Female Lead Lin Lanfen in the original novel stealing the fate of the original Female Lead of the so called true Novel Zheng Xue after Transmigrating and her Harem even if Zheng Xue wasn't problematic and not naive and does not frame people Lin Lanfen casted Zheng Xue as a Cannon Fodder and tortured and disfigured her face just incase she might steal her harem and for entertainment and because she was the only person that has a close enough beauty to her Zheng Xue was the original Female Lead destined to be Emperor and gets her fate stolen by Lin Lanfen as a forgotten Prince of the Palace with only Crown Prince in name as she was mocked by society woman and men alike Song Jiao thought she would transmigrate as a Villainess atleast like most cliches but instead as the Useless Abandoned Female Lead ?! Song Jiao: So Pitiful! after transmigrating I'll soon be tortured?! I want to leave!! Song Jiao said in a temper as she pulls her hair in anger the System sighed before speaking Emperor Faceslapping System: [Host if you become Emperor and gain 1 Billion Karma Points from the Female Lead I will send you back to your world] Song Jiao body went numb and fainted as she heard that Emperor Faceslapping System: [Host?!]

    14 Chs 21 Koleksi

  • Black veiled by Romance Roses original

    Black veiled by Romance Roses

    Urban REINCARNATION SYSTEM MYSTERY TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN SURVIVAL BETRAYAL REVENGE COUNTERATTACK

    Shooting Star, Handsome, Fallen Chaebol Lee Jungyoon died in a cold Prison Cell only at 27 after his Company fell, and was found in a Scandal after being found out that there was Melamine contained in the Food Productions, Money laundering, and Embezzlement. His Parents have been Convicted to a death sentence leaving him alone, since his other Family Members didn't dare to help out of selfishness that left Lee Jungyoon to Despair. And the cause? An Emotionless, cruel, and cold girl, the Heiress, and Princess of the Generational Sanhu Corporation Jung Rina; that unfortunately became obsessed with him who set all the 'crimes' like a Play, in a spur of Ultimate Luck he managed to Regress 15 years back, and has made it his life goal to kill Jung Rina. ... .. A girl who just just finished eating Crabs at a Sea food Restaurant for her Popular Mukbang channel found out she had become a Comic Character; Jung Rina, after she woke up from her nap to see herself in a 12 year old's body. That same person is also the Villainess of a Comic named Deceptive Regression. [Genre: Gore, Romance, Mystery, Drama] Tags: Harem, OP Protagonist, Regression, Super super super cool Protagonist. Stars: 2.5/5 Super super super cool Protagonist was Bullshit! For fun, she always read low stars Comic, and talk shit about it anonymously. Now, she didn't actually think she would transmigrate into the said Shitty Comic.

    0 Chs 8 Koleksi