Repetitive Description
But when Tang Li Xue saw an over one-hundred-meter-tall stone statue facing the entrance in the middle of the huge bright hall, she quickly took a few steps back in reflex.
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Does the Author have an obsession with the Word 50,100,etc(insert number) -meter tall when it comes to size? a Short 'Gigantic', 'Enormous', etc would be enough to Describe the height. I'm sorry if this seems like I'm hating but I just want to make my own opinion since the Author has a Repetitive habit
The Author has a bad habit on repeating sentences, I hope the Author learns to fix that. It makes the story feel very Repetitive by writing the same thing too much.
The palpitating horrible aura emitted from the strange creature's body became increasingly terrifying with each passing second as it absorbed the abundant star energy from [Star Gathering Bodhi Tree]'s Star Essence.
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Were
Each of them was also holding a thick and heavy bone trident in their grasp.
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idk make a mask, nose plug with her energy manipulation skill thing
Body*
NOOO ANOTHER 'SLIM BIDY' THERE'S THIN, HOURGLASS BUT I'M GOING INSANE WITH SLIM
YESS I'VE FINALLY FINISHED MY EXAMS NOW I CAN CONTINUE READING ON WHAT I'VE MISSED IN THIS NOVEL, I'M COMING BACKKK 😭
I imagined the beautiful lady, with long black hair, and porcelain skin from afar but when you see her closer her skin is rotting and peeling off under her dress, and a corpse like smell is attached to her. The thin fingers she hid under her sleeves are actually claws that are stained in crimson dried red. When she opens her mouth it'll agape like some sort of viper with teeth attached everywhere inside her mouth, and sunken eyes.
The beautiful lady swiftly flashed forward toward Tang Li Xue and forcefully grabbed Tang Li Xue's neck!
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TLX is s bit arrogant.. But I also do that too, so I can't say much.
Tang Li Xue began to examine the giant Queen of the Sea statue closer while commenting in a leisurely tone: "Not bad, the statue of this lady is quite beautiful. Unfortunately, she is still far from being as good-looking as me."
Reincarnated As a Fox With System
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