WanderingFool

WanderingFool

male LV 13

Just a fool wandering through life.

2022-04-20 Bergabung Global
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Moments 49
WanderingFool
WanderingFool
1 days ago
Replied to tedmosby2016

Must not have ever met an introverted religious person

"Powerful, handsome, humble, and values his comrades. If he weren't so modest, he'd probably be famous throughout Konoha by now."

Naruto: Strength Through Teaching

Naruto: Strength Through Teaching

Anime & Comics · ChaosNinja

WanderingFool
WanderingFool
1 days ago
Replied to Eruvadhor

Plenty of people like power sharing. Would rather everyone around you suffer due to selfishly clinging to everything you can get your hands or share a bit to give allies a safety net?

Although he had many questions about his ability to see this information and the reason behind it, Tanaka's biggest doubt was: 'Why can't I see anything beyond Akane-san's name?'

NARUTO: THE STRONGEST UZUMAKI

NARUTO: THE STRONGEST UZUMAKI

Anime & Comics · Tozoku

WanderingFool
WanderingFool
1 months ago
Commented

The lie usually causes more damage than the truth, and revealing a lie will make people distrust everything.

"Don't worry, the lie won't last forever..." Bronya gently placed a hand on her chest, her gaze resolute. "Although we can't do it now, I believe that one day Belobog will be strong enough to bear the truth. When that time comes, I will reveal everything."

In the Star Rail, relying on 3 points of intelligence to shock Herta

In the Star Rail, relying on 3 points of intelligence to shock Herta

Anime & Comics · Cham_Zin

WanderingFool
WanderingFool
1 months ago
Commented

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The reason to fear death is simple. It is because nobody knows what occurs after death.

Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist

Villain: Manipulating the Heroines into hating the Protagonist

Eastern · Evil_Villain

WanderingFool
WanderingFool
1 months ago
Commented

Why always orphans tho?

Before this, he was a normal Orphan in the 21st century.

HP: Magic Punk

HP: Magic Punk

Book&Literature · kamidemond

WanderingFool
WanderingFool
1 months ago
Commented

It gets more jarring every time. Really ruining the reading experience. These aren't cliffs, they're walls.

WanderingFool
WanderingFool
1 months ago
Posted

I'm not sure the best way to put it, but the way this is written feels... almost childish? Like, not trying to be mean, but everything from prose to dialogue gives an impression of ungrounded naivety. While not bad, perse, there is a noticeable greenhouse feel to the MC and cardboard cutout feel to every other character. Also needs a little more spice in the background and setting departments. If those things can balance out and improve, this could potentially turn into a fairly decent story.

WanderingFool
WanderingFool
1 months ago
Commented

Thought he had sensory abilities though

However, this kind of ninjutsu requires relevant training. For example, if Mutsuki were to use this ninjutsu now, while it obstructs others' vision, it also obstructs his own.

Naruto: Strength Through Teaching

Naruto: Strength Through Teaching

Anime & Comics · ChaosNinja

WanderingFool
WanderingFool
1 months ago
Commented

This line was so good I had to read it twice

Gu Tang sneered, "Geniuses seek answers; I can't even be bothered to ask questions."

In the Star Rail, relying on 3 points of intelligence to shock Herta

In the Star Rail, relying on 3 points of intelligence to shock Herta

Anime & Comics · Cham_Zin

WanderingFool
WanderingFool
2 months ago
Posted

I read this story elsewhere, but felt I should leave a review anyway. The story started mildly slow, but once it picked up, it was a very good read for a while. Unfortunately, I'm not sure what happened, but all kinds of build up got tossed out or condensed into one of the most rushed conclusions I've ever had the displeasure of reading. I legitimately would have preferred a hiatus cut off in the middle of an arc over that sloppy ending. To summarize, the first 40 chapters were slow but interesting to read, 40ish-130ish were very good, 130ish to 150ish were decent albeit with a tonal shift, and the last couple dozen chapters slap you across the face like a deadbeat dad.