I think you are rushing it a little too much, but otherwise, I like it, so keep up the good work
you really need to stick one name for technique and cultivation lvls cause you are changing them every chapter it seems
hey you finally update the story again can't wait for more
you need to fix chapter 29 before I will read any more cause 28 and 29 are the same chapter so it's hard to picture
thanks for the chapter
just a thought but you could have made a new story if you wanted to do another insert I'll still try to read this hope it doesn't kill the story for me
thanks for the chapter
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I really enjoy reading this I have noticed some of the words are stuck together as in you forgot the space only flaw I have seen so far otherwise great fanfic and I'll keep reading if you keep writing
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all chapters after this one will not load up what's going on