Is there suppose to be a word between his & the word and?
He lifted his and stared at the darkening sky. Faint thunder rolled within the accumulating grey clouds. It was going to rain...
A Gorgeous White (BL)
Fantasy · Heather_ANARE
Been really enjoying this story. Looking forward for more updates.
Wonderful story. I enjoy reading. Only part that could be change. As it doesn’t make sense unless the author trying to do a flashback. The last chapter they had the baby. They were doing things with the baby. However, the first bonus chapter. Is about when they returned to the castle. The baby hasn’t been born yet. Only celebrated. They are waiting. Then the 2nd bonus chapter it’s mention the baby has been born over a year so far. Just feels like at the end of the last chapter about feeding the cake to the baby should’ve been in the bonus chapter since the baby hasn’t been bonus in the 1s bonus chapter. It’s mention in the 2nd bonus chapter.
Waiting for more chapters to read this story.
Enjoying the story so far. Waiting on updates.
The synopsis of this story really drew me in to start reading.
Interesting plot so far. I wonder where the store is going to go.
Just started reading. Very interesting.
Really testing the waters to see what happens. o7
Instantly guessing what the young Maeruthan meant, Rowan smiled. "I saw two secret lovers sharing a deep passionate kiss."
A Gorgeous White (BL)
Fantasy · Heather_ANARE
Yolanda wow. Everything is about what she wants. Not thinking of the future issues. Instead how she will turn out in this story. Either toss aside due to her selfishness or will she grow as a person.
Yolanda could barely conceal her gleeful smile.
Sweet Mom, Rich Dad: Eight Adorable Children
Urban · TheHana