Caciqxe

you sure? In a way Thorfinn killed the Jarl's heir and conquered the Jarl's seat of Kattegat and his subjects bend the knee in pledge of fealty (or they will lose their heads), oaths were taken more seriously back then, so in their way they have to choose between Thorfinn or Haraldson, and our boy looks like the better choice due to his latest feats.

now the question is he Earl Thorfinn or Jarl Thorfinn?

Bo-Katan Kryze

It's kinda sad that he isn't force sensitive, when I saw that he was from Alderaan i thought that he was gonna be a member of the Qel-droma family(search them, they're cool), timeline after battle of naboo and before clone wars, kinda blank period. Who's gonna be his waifu?

The MC is Good but he lacks leadership, if he keeps like that the story will follow the canon and he won't be able to make any changes.

MC better not have that Stupid Sea Weakness

Not gonna lie, the MC is kinda pathetic (either a weakling or incompetent, can't decide which one). Realistically he's gonna die very soon or Sofia will end cuckolding him for being disappointing, in those time if you were weak or not smart enough you didn't live for long. By the way you didn't put what the MC looks like, physical appearance, height, etc.

There's no worst feeling than waiting for the next chapter.