Michael had never been a fan of his luck.
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Michael had never been a fan of his luck.
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Michael also didn't want to admit that part of the reason was his reluctance to face another failed chance at gaining a skill.
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But the system says disciple rank mage?
"Should I say… as expected of a Commander-rank mage?"
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A strange emotion stirred within him, but he pushed it aside.
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So explain it when it's relevant. Not before...
All of this was far removed from Michael's current concerns.
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The moment both are mentioned together, even that distinction goes out the window. It might've been ok for characters that were never supposed to even be in the same chapter. This paragraph needs a much more major difference...
If he were, perhaps he'd be like Brian during his school years—a genius who managed to awaken a second class because he had ignited a life seed before awakening.
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This sentence ain't sentencing...
"I want to ask of the Association current thoughts on these cracks," Michael said.
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Fun fact: cloth is the material from which clothes are made. There is no singular form of clothes in English.
Unfortunately, Michael hadn't brought a lot of disguise cloth.
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