IamD_

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2022-03-01 Bergabung Global
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2 years ago
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2 years ago
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An American trying to put us in the skin of the ucronazi, si quereis preservar vuestras neuronas no leais nade de esto, solo lei el primer capitulo If you want to preserve your neurons, don't read any of this, I only read the first chapter and when I read "The Times while Nazi civilians are being interviewed" I almost took my AK-47 and got involved in shooting with all the Nazis I see on the street ,his second book will surely be about how the Americans liberated Iraq. Z🅾️

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2 years ago
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Summers wolf who are they ?

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2 years ago
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Bro it's fine that you drop a few jokes here and there or that the main character drops a joke at some point but literally your novel is more meaningless jokes without grace with a bit of boxing I'm not saying it for disrespect or anything in fact your novel it has a good plot in these 3 chapters but the comic narration takes away all the seriousness of a boxing story it's as if suddenly rocky balboa is punching he stops and says some joke doesn't make any sense then for the good of the work and Of your work that I repeat once again I do not want to offend, I just try to enjoy your work because of how innovative it is and how fresh the boxing theme is.