I may have added the laughing emoji. but the question is serious
3) There will be no netorare in the novel. I'll even ask readers for their opinions in polls for certain scenes. The last thing I want is self inserting readers crying and bitching over useless things.
Villain Reborn: I Shall Dominate Them All
Fantasy · slowpokeChaos
Zhu Ying
Zhu Ying
Buku ini telah dihapus.
can you please change the name I want to use it for my novel. please don't troll
u making it sound like the dude just discovered their deathbut previous paras implies something else ..?
But now that they are dead, the thing that was breaking him the most was the same warm memories of his parents. The darkness inside him now felt boundless and endless and he was lost in it, cold and alone.
Mythos of the Demonic Divine
Fantasy · Hanand_Giri
....I not i.also too much .... takes my immersion out.I understand what u are going for but repeating the words didn't achieve it
"I want their warm love back, i want to hug them again, i want to see them again, i want to see them laughing and smiling again, i want play with my father once more, i want to eat the food made by my mother, i want to....i want to...i want to....i want to...i want to.....i want to....."
Mythos of the Demonic Divine
Fantasy · Hanand_Giri
why 'my' 😭😭
Without wasting his words on such a monster, Andrew moved towards him, his right hand outstretching towards the old man's head accompanying my right hand was a black pistol. His eyes never left the black bloodshot eyes, as he pressed the nozzle at the temple.
Mythos of the Demonic Divine
Fantasy · Hanand_Giri
on the floor*and I guess u missed so before that"so much that anyone would"
He looked so pitiful with his slim bony body draped in a pure white lab coat, sprawled in the floor, crying like there was no tommorow, that anyone might've felt sympathy towards the pitiful old man. But not Andrew.
Mythos of the Demonic Divine
Fantasy · Hanand_Giri
no need to say 'indicating his old age' when u literally started with old man
The old man before him looked to be in his sixties, he had a head full of white short hairs and cracks spreading all over his face indicating his old age. His bloodshot black eyes were spewing streams of tears that kept flowing with his mucus leaking from his snout.
Mythos of the Demonic Divine
Fantasy · Hanand_Giri
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original Sacred System : Deviant Dragon's Whispers
4.63
Check out my new book, "Reincarnation into Insanity". It is much better and unique than sacred. I am also enjoying writing it. "When death is the beginning, two souls become one to create something extraordinary." After the apocalypse, the powerful, vengeful trample upon the weak in this new world. Ethan’s reincarnated journey knows love and deception. Getting extraordinary powers isn’t enough as he must uncover the shocking truths and battle for control over his destiny. All of a sudden, chaos erupts as planets materialize in the sky, portals tearing open all around. A handful of people, including Ethan, are able to enter the portals and discover the mesmerizing realms beyond. These ethereal domains come to be known as "Rift Pockets" and are initially viewed as humanity's hope in the post apocalyptic world... until they become one of their worst nightmares. As the situation worsens, the unseen puppeteers that control the world of Helen also make their move, their intentions unknown. As the stakes run higher from the risks of losing those he spent his entire life loving and protecting, Ethan is left with making decisions holding far-reaching consequences. He has to choose—sacrifice himself for the world or fight for his own personal gains. Join Ethan on a heart-stopping journey of rebirth and self-discovery as he fights to uncover the truth and seize control of his fate. *** I have set up a bot in the server that asks general questions like 'nyx what is the history of helen?' in case you forget it. So do join! https://discord.gg/ba8R4f3dqx56 Chs 3.1k Koleksi
unfortunately didn't receive much readers and I am demotivated to write this.my upcoming story 'Return of Crimson Sword God' got better emotional first chap though.I love it.