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ali_borvayeh
ali_borvayeh
5 days ago
Posted

at ch13 and i love it so far almost dropped it cus of the harem tag . thank god i didnt. its not the harem that you might think of. just give it a shot you wont regret it (probably).

ali_borvayeh
ali_borvayeh
2 months ago
Posted

i almost dropped it thinking ive read it before. like the few first chapters are copy paste of another novel. i think they are exactly the same even the names. not sure which one is the original but this one is beter than the other one.

ali_borvayeh
ali_borvayeh
2 months ago
Posted

just finished ch415 and im not very satisfied. first, way too much fighting, its tiresome .second, the drama is to cliché. family dead then fined out they alive and well and both from an ultra big but hiden family that leave there children out on there own until they become 18 , brother left him and then is tiring to be a villain (like itachi) and protecting him from the dark without informing him for absolutely no reason , the author tried to put some reasons but that are simply illogical. but maybe if there was less fighting and more story progression it might have been more readable.

ali_borvayeh
ali_borvayeh
2 months ago
Posted

beautiful. extra beautiful ending which is so fucking rare these days. and a very smooth read overall. praise the Cat my favorite character.

ali_borvayeh
ali_borvayeh
4 months ago
Commented

you look like a dog. im dyeing.

"Are you Naruto's irresponsible guardian? You look like a dog, you can't even take care of a little brat!"

Naruto, Be My Son

Naruto, Be My Son

Anime & Comics · Ginormous_Madman

ali_borvayeh
ali_borvayeh
4 months ago
Posted

im ch 3 and i like it so far but i will give it a 5 for the sole reason that he said besmelah. i got so exited when i read it XD ..................

ali_borvayeh
ali_borvayeh
4 months ago
Posted

damn is this dota2 am or what? .............................................................................................................................................

ali_borvayeh
ali_borvayeh
4 months ago
Posted

its not too bad but there are some dumb moments heir and there. like the Daimyō taking part in the hokage selection and everyone acting like he is there boss. the ninja villages are not subservient to the Daimyō. they want his money and he wants protection. the other problem is the characters sometimes acting ooc. like danzo getting flustered easily. the plot is not bad though like the author is very bold. trying not to spoil but like he saves who ever he wants which is not very liked overall but he do it anyway which is a plus because we need more creative authors like this.

ali_borvayeh
ali_borvayeh
4 months ago
Replied to BrabbitX

wow thnks indeed

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  • i want to be a father in overlord original

    i want to be a father in overlord

    Anime & Comics OVERPOWERED SLICEOFLIFE ISEKAI ANIME NONHUMAN NO-HAREM

    it will be a slice-of-life Overlord fanfic. The MC dies and reincarnates into overlord and realizes he has a chance to be a father like he always wanted to be. as a fellow reader and Overlord fan I hate when fanfics focus on Yugdurassil before the new world so there will be an explanation for his power and then we will jump straight to new world. there will be very few changes to the overall story and characters and it will mostly follow the original. no harem, no sex, no lust. momonga_sama will be present. artwork isn't mine artwork creator: Buğra Erke

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