I really loved the story, hardly noticed any errors (e.g. typos, etc). A bit of an emotional rollercoaster, but I was happy with the ending. [img=recommend][img=fp]
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is her aunt not also a wolf in this pack?
They all watched my wold in awe. This reminded me that I'm the only wolf in this pack. Their reaction didn't surprise me as I know I'd have reacted the same if any Lycan visited my former pack.
Fantasy · kriyachauhan
Should "tone" be "town"?
“We just moved here recently,” Hayden said to my right, “And we’re trying to figure out our way around tone but seems like we lost our way.” I gave him a light smile. He was charming—they both were.
Fantasy · Tina Freemoon
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The Boss's Daughter
· J.T. Marie