Apollocus

4h

Commented

Loving this so far. Please don't drop this. I will literally beg on my knees!

ch 10 Crown Game

Tower of God: Sequence Strength

Others · Yesnth

Apollocus

7h

Commented

Thx for the chapter!

ch 27 Damn it...

Nano-Machine (DC X INVINCIBLE)

Anime & Comics · PettiaMius_6689

Apollocus

8h

Commented

Mannish boy is some nightmare fuel alright....

I instantly felt incredibly awkward as I momentarily forgot about my creepy sibling that reminded me of Mannish Boy from Jojo.

Reincarnated in Mushoku Tensei - Sword and Magic (fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · Jaed21

Apollocus

9h

Commented

If the omitrix copies aliens from the universe and these people are like mutated people couldnt he transform into a mutated human and become the apex of them.

This got the 10 year old's attention. Nobody just has ice powers, they don't look like aliens, definitely not robots so what's going on They did a few tricks like make snow flakes come down and create snow cones for kids.

The Boys: It's Hero Time

Anime & Comics · GenV

Apollocus

15h

Replied to PettiaMius_6689

Usually growth like that means u have a tumor that is affecting your growth hormone output.

Ezra sighed a bit, "No... I wore them because I liked the straight silver contacts better, nothing too personal about that part." He shrugged. He could tell she wasn't too pleased with his answers so far, but she accepted them either way.

Nano-Machine (DC X INVINCIBLE)

Anime & Comics · PettiaMius_6689

Apollocus

17h

Replied to Bronz_Deck

Thank you for clarifying and correcting me.

Sure, my wounds really bothered me since they weren't really healed but they had no impact on me so they may as well not exist. Battle Continuation was broken, as long as the wound wasn't lethal or debilitating I could power through it like it wasn't even there.

My Hero Academia: Restless Gambler

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

Apollocus

17h

Commented

Thx for the chapter!

ch 15 Supporter

In Danmachi as a Witcher

Anime & Comics · Orion_Art

Apollocus

17h

Commented

The defense form give him pretty good levels of regen he should have been either fully healed or decently healed already.

Sure, my wounds really bothered me since they weren't really healed but they had no impact on me so they may as well not exist. Battle Continuation was broken, as long as the wound wasn't lethal or debilitating I could power through it like it wasn't even there.

My Hero Academia: Restless Gambler

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

Apollocus

17h

Commented

If he keeps running with his phase shift ability his passive to increase his speed but reduces his use of energy as he runs more, he would become super super super fast.

"Don't worry, I will be testing this out differently" I already knew my strength and speed, I just needed to see how much they changed.

My Hero Academia: Restless Gambler

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

Apollocus

1d

Commented

Thx for the chapter!

ch 22 Vacation Across The Sea

A Mark Left Behind

Anime & Comics · ObsessedNovelist

Apollocus

4d

Commented

Thx for the chapter!

ch 79 Golden Six Vs the Figure [1]

A Wanderer's Lies

Anime & Comics · _MYSTERY

Apollocus

5d

Commented

Definitely not, AI sounds superfluous and adds a lot of words that don't need to be in dialogue and yours is not superfluous, and what you've written is also better than most dialogues in fanfics as well. Keep it up you're doing great.

This is my first time writing so I want to ask if the conversation between people look normal?, I don't use AI, so I want to ask if it's seems a little AI'ish if ykwim.

Shallot's Dragon Ball

Anime & Comics · Nob7

Apollocus

5d

Commented

I think him learning moves fast is fine since most saiyans can learn those easily the only hard thing for him would probably getting stronger and unlock transformations since that is the actually hard thing about being a saiyan.

Do you think he improve too fast, or is it ok?, What do you think about the fight, Is it good?