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bro gave him a switch

Author the new cover is something…

Did you give up on the quality or something what’s going on

Then it wouldn’t be a story anymore, explaining and weaving I formation into long paragraphs is the base of a story

Your writing is so engaging I even forgot that the detective had the lie detector and I just thought that was his inner voice saying true or lie. Good work

At first you could argue that since ddraigs power is exponential (2^amount of boosts) he is still “weak” until he gets a few boosts, but there was so much time between his first boost and the fight idk. Maybe his power boost where he sacrifices his hair is temp only. Or it could just be that author sucks at writing fight scenes, as after all this is a smut novel.

The detective is right Pringles are the best brand of chips

Imma say the only thing that I don’t like in the chapter is the fact that lays are “the best” brand, since Pringles exists.

I think he is going to witness the movie plotline with "first row seats". I expect he will also respond to stupid decisions and tell the characters what to do instead or something like that, we can only guess.