Tftc. Enjoying the story so far. Though the part about helping the old lady was not a good addition. To reach the top of anything, you can’t be this pure naive good guy. It added a comedic element but it felt very out of character for the mc to potentially miss the finals of a game he has dedicated his life to just to aid an old lady.
Honestly Neither, are there any other options?
I just changed the sentences where Alex agreed with the father that he was in the wrong. Instead, I emphasized that no matter what he would not turn his back on his pokemon. So instead Alex is conflicted but still believes that he did the right thing. Quite a few have commented on the previous chapter so I was not sure if I should delete it. What will happen to their comments? Will they also get deleted?
That would be a spoiler :). But since its Christmas ... this war would encompass several regions and thus have multiple major battlefields. So a few legendaries including the Lords of Space and Time will descend to really hammer in the message.
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Champion of the Sea (Pokemon SI)
Anime & Comics · DarthPrince
Huh, didn't know that. Can you briefly expand on the test?
This is kind of a spoiler for later but still... The master ball is currently in very early stages of development and will be involved in the evil teams storyline. There is no guarantee that this will even pan out and be able to store legendaries. Even if they are able to make the master ball later on in this fic, no poke ball will ever be strong enough to hold a legendary against its will. They can just simply break out and destroy the master ball if they wish. Does that mean it is still a master ball?
Like I mentioned in the Chapter, this is not how bonds form. Bonds will typically require both the trainer and pokemon to have an emotional connection and mutual loyalty. They will need to want to bond with each other and the bond forms because of mutual consent. However, Legendaries do not conform to the normal rules, do they? It is entirely possible that Suicune may force a bond with a human he likes and finds worthy. Maybe there is something special about Alex that even he doesn't know anything about
The image of Alex Waterflower:
I have shared the image of Alex Waterflower in the comments. This is a good approximation of what I imagined Alex would look like. This image was generated by Retribrutus on Spacebattles.
Champion of the Sea (Pokemon SI)
Anime & Comics · DarthPrince
The image of Alex Waterflower:
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original Champion of the Sea (Pokemon SI)
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When the firstborn son of the Cerulean City Gym leader and older brother of Misty Waterflower received memories from a previous life, he was horrified to find that he was not even mentioned in the anime. Watch Alex Waterflower etch his name into the annals of history and showcase the might of a Champion of the Sea. A pre-cannon Self Insert into the World of Pokemon. Inspired by Hard Enough by Viva01 and The New Normal by Cartec. (A Water Type Specialist SI). I do not own Pokemon. I do not own the image11 Chs 2k Koleksi
I get that this final doesn’t really matter. What I am saying is that even this worthless final should be worth more than helping a random old lady. Him being late is actually great as that helps his future team realise just how valuable he is. My main contention with this is that when you tell us that he choose to do this knowing he was going to be late and miss more of a football game than he always was, you tell us that he values this random act more than his team and football which is inconsistent with the character you have developed. Overall, I realise this is too much thought over a simple joke. However, this is one of the better modern family fanfics and I am looking forward to see how his character develops.
Modern Family: New Life
TV · Nathe07