I thought this dialogue between the protagonist and the Goddess Nyx could be better. He could act more imposing and powerful. Instead of offering her something, he should say that he's giving her an opportunity, and so on. After all, he's the creator of the tower, but okay.
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This young man was under his command, but they didn't know each other since one was an officer and noble, while the other was just a common soldier and a peasant. The boy's features were delicate like those of a woman; his thin lips had lost their color, and his elastic skin appeared terribly pale.
I transmigrated as a french soldier during XVIIIth century
History · Super_nugget
Did you manage to find it?
The mess Sylas was in wasn't even his fault. It was all because of the Corleone family's foolish blunder, which had earned them the emperor's wrath. The emperor had vowed to wipe out the entire Corleone family. For Sylas, who had left the family long ago, it was like a bolt out of the blue.
Lord of Caldera
War · Aurora22
hahahahahaha
"From now on, only English!" After everyone had moved to the life raft, Logan issued a new order solemnly.
"The Heart of Germany"
War · sckyh
Zongzi?
"The doctor says you don't have any serious injuries, just a head concussion. You'll be fine once you wake up!" This sounded quite familiar. "How about you?" Logan asked the larger zongzi. From the side, he had a rather weathered face, sporadic stubble accentuating his despondent mood, but his eagle-like sharp eyes remained clear and bright. "I'm okay too, just a bit sore when I wake up, and the doctor said I shouldn't be out in the wind for several months!" he replied slowly. "Oh, it's okay, just take some time to rest!" Logan reassured absentmindedly, but the larger zongzi gave him a strange look and sighed heavily.
"The Heart of Germany"
War · sckyh
hahahahahaha
Suddenly, Logan recalled a post he had seen online: a British woman almost suffocated her boyfriend during intimacy because her breasts were too big! While this story might seem exaggerated to Easterners, such "fierce" women were not uncommon in Europe!
"The Heart of Germany"
War · sckyh
I liked it, but at the same time, I didn’t. His immaturity is so frustrating! I get that it’s supposed to be part of the comedy, but when I read the synopsis, I imagined something different. I thought it would be about how he accidentally runs for office, ends up as a politician, and has to act like a genius to keep up the charade. But so far, he’s not even pretendinghe’s just doing whatever he feels like, lol. It’s kinda funny, but honestly, I’m finding it more stressful than entertaining. Maybe if the story gets developed more, I’ll come back to check it out.
But that's the only thing I found strange about this work, but I loved the idea and everything else