Lencana 7
Moments 212
Nah it perfect the way it is your doing a good job don’t Start doubting yourself now
A/N: Honestly… should I rewrite this story? I would definitely restart where his mother died and instead of going out early he would try until he's 12 or something.
Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld
Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3
Anissa
What novel?
MJ's mother stared horrified at what she was witnessing. Ever so slowly she closed the door and listened to MJ's moaning, before rushing to her room. She sat in her room and had both hands over her face before going to her ears. She wasn't sure she was going to forget seeing the two of them going at it like wild animals…
Spider-Man Mayhem
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
That seems a bit cheap I think the powers of a god would be note expensive
- **Mjolnir (Thor's Hammer) (500 Credits):** Grants the power of Thor, usable only if deemed worthy.
I Am The Flash
TV · Adams2004
Merc
Senna's performance began to attract big teams, Which team do you think he goes to? If you guys have any recommendations or suggestions leave a comment. If you like this story support it with a Powerstone.
Formula 1: New Dynasty
Celebrities · FrozenBloosm
For free kinda kills the whole thing I mean he wouldn’t have to struggle at all and would literally destroy everything in his path, I want a tank I get a tank
6.system that loyal to me that granted me weapons,vehicles to planes for free
TWD.
TV · Ghost141simon
Nah I feel like that too hopefully he can turn down the glazing of the everyone giving compliments to each other down a level or two
Barry reflected on their words, acknowledging their efforts as a team. "It's been a collective effort. We're making a difference out there, and that's what matters."
I Am The Flash
TV · Adams2004
Yellow means his connection to speed force but since his connected to the sage,strength and the others would that not change the color of his trail maybe when he get stronger he could have a multi colored trail
Barry zoomed into the main area of S.T.A.R. Labs, his yellow lightning dissipating as he came to a stop. Cisco, Caitlin, and Dr. Wells were already there, waiting for him.
I Am The Flash
TV · Adams2004
That’s a good Idea say his restriction on summing more soldiers relies on his rank in the army
ch 0 3 The Rebellion in the Capital Xianyang!
Jjz
Anime & Comics · Meliodas_Kutlu
I get where your coming from kingdom got a lot of chapters if I remember correctly it shold be 700+ anyway you’ll only get better the longer you write so keep up the hard work
ch 0 3 The Rebellion in the Capital Xianyang!
Jjz
Anime & Comics · Meliodas_Kutlu
Some constructive criticism your story is to fast paced a lot happens in so little word it’s hard to be emerged in the world your creating if if it goes by to quickly but for your first time writing 👍🏻
ch 0 3 The Rebellion in the Capital Xianyang!
Jjz
Anime & Comics · Meliodas_Kutlu
How does he know her name pretty sure she didn’t introduce herself?
Superman landed softly on the ground, his expression resolute. "We won't let you harm this city, Faora."
I Am The Flash
TV · Adams2004