Zarks_5

At first the book was boring. it was as if there were different people writing it so the ideas were changing. How did Alexander go from being an orphan to having a sick Luna mother. if he was destined for the throne why fight with other people for it. But here's the good part. Around chapter 23, the story became steady, I loved the cliffhangers and the progression of the plot. keep up the good work. and please don't allow chapter 1 to 22 to repeat itself. Thanks